Talk:Bill Isaacs

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aayamalak22.

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request for improvements to Bill Isaacs entry
I have added more information to the first paragraph to fit with expectations for the introductory paragraph, and added places where this entry would fit at the bottom of the entry. Do I need to do more or resubmit this for consideration at this point?Vicky Paraschak (talk) 15:35, 16 October 2017 (UTC) Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference?

Yes, every fact in the article is referenced with a reliable and appropriate reference. Every sentence in the article is numbered which opens up as a link to the reliable resource. These resources have information about this fact and where it came from.

Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article?

I checked a few of the citations and they worked they all opened to journals, there is a few sentences that are paraphrased in the article from these journals. Nothing was plagiarized, every sentence was written in its own form. There are similar points but all of them are worded differently in the article.

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?

Everything in the article is relevant to the article topic. The article topic is about the athlete Bill Isaacs, it’s an encyclopedia which gives information of many aspects of one topic. There’s only two aspects that are talked about in the article that is, his major sports achievements and contributions, and his contribution to Canadian sport. These two aspects relate to the athlete is life. In these paragraphs nothing was off topic, it all went back to the main point. Aayamalak22 (talk) 02:47, 19 March 2018 (UTC)