Talk:Bill Kitchen (inventor)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this new article, but note that other editors have wondered if it is an attempted promotion. This concern can be addressed by removing some text about business deals and related matters that are not encyclopedic or not of interest to the general reader..

---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 15:42, 4 June 2020 (UTC)