Talk:Billiards and Snooker Control Council/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 14:31, 24 August 2020 (UTC)


 * " Mr A. H. Collins-Orme" - I don't know about British English, but in American English at least, there should be a full stop after Mr. I'm not super familiar with the pecularities of BE, though.
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "John Roberts Sr" - Full stop after Sr? There's full stops after Jr. and Sr. earlier in the list
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "a staff member at The Sportsman - italicize The Sportsman, since it's the name of a publication
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "The first snooker competition organised by the BA&CC was the English Amateur Championship" - What BA&CC stands for has never been directly introduced? Well actually it is, but in the next section.  Move the acronym explanation up to here
 * this should have been "... the Billiards Association ..." - amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "shot at the oject ball after a foul" - You mean object ball, right?
 * Yes indeed. Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "Loss of Control of the Professional Game" - Control isn't a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalized in the heading
 * Decapitalized heading. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "Leslie Driffield, a member of the BA&CC Council was present at a meeting" - Comma after Council, see MOS:HEADCAPS
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "Loss of Control of the International Amateur Game - Why are some of these words capitalized? Headings are suppose to be in sentence case, I believe
 * Decapitalized heading. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "At the beginning of the 1990s, the B&SCC was struggling financially as a result of the removal of its Sports Council funding" - It's worth mentioning why the funding was cut
 * I've added the little that I could find. (No suitable results found in Newspaper databases.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:08, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "Successor Organisations" - Organisations should be lowercase
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Ref 26 (Shamos) needs the page number
 * The Google Books pages are actually from a different book to the one that is shown at the link. (The New Illustrated Encyclopedia of Billiards, not The Complete Book of Billiards.) Reference amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Be consistent with capitalization in references. Some are in sentence case, others are in title case.  Pick one and stick with it.
 * Done (I think - let me know if not.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)

That's all I've found. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 02:06, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking on this review, and let me know if you notice anything further. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
 * I've hopefully addressed your points above, . Let me know if anything else needs to be done. Thanks and regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:08, 26 August 2020 (UTC)