Talk:Billionaire Ted/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * See WP:WAS for opening sentence.
 * Expand the lead to summarize the entire article.
 * "A following" doesn't sound right. reword
 * Archive sources (you can use this).
 * Do NOT use the "publisher" parameter for websites.
 * Add the "use mdy dates" template to fix references.
 * #3 is missing a date and an author name.
 * #5 and #9 appear to be dead links.

Progress

 * I have made the adjustments you requested, except the one about "publisher". The reason is because I would just like to ask a question because if I use "Website" or "work" it puts the title in italics and my understanding was that non-print sources (like ESPN) should be in regular text. What should I used instead?  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 09:52, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I would suggest putting PW Torch, Den of Geek, and Goliath.com in italics. Also, #3 is still missing an author/date. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:54, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Done those.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 14:50, 21 May 2021 (UTC)