Talk:Billy Yates (singer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 07:06, 7 January 2022 (UTC) Nominator: TenPoundHammer (talk · contribs) at 02:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

Prose

 * Billy Yates was born on — I'd write full name "Billy Wayne Yates" on the first mention in the prose
 * in Wappapello, Missouri as a teen — missing MOS:GEOCOMMA
 * Yates traveled between Missouri and Nashville, Tennessee several times — missing MOS:GEOCOMMA
 * One of these songs, "I Don't Need Your Rockin' Chair", was released as a single that year and was nominated for a Grammy Award. — avoid starting a sentence by a number.
 * calling "Flowers" "maudlin" — missing comma
 * Suggesting to link AllMusic
 * After exiting Columbia, he founded his — at the start of every paragraph, we'll need to specify Yates. Replace "he" by "Yate"
 * "real people singing about real things" — we'll need a citation immediately after this quote
 * All the tables need caption. So:
 * should be


 * Overall, it is a well written article.

Images

 * Images can take ALT text
 * File:George JonesCFF.JPG — How/why is this freely licenced?

That is it. Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:37, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Think I've addressed all your changes. I didn't know about MOS:GEOCOMMA or sronly before. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 02:46, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

All good here; promoting! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 13:55, 8 January 2022 (UTC)