Talk:Bin He

Jan 2012
This article sounds incredibly silly. It is all "He this" and "He that", and you can't tell if it's a pronoun or this person's name.

I recommend the article be re-written in French. 134.173.56.128 (talk) 09:43, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

IEEE Life Sciences
Hello! I added a link to the IEEE Life Sciences Wikipedia article. Please see my COI on my User page. Thank you!

Mdrozdowski (talk) 16:58, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

Marked up first paragraph
[The OP deleted his original request. I have restored my reply. —C.Fred (talk) 19:57, 14 March 2018 (UTC)]

By way of illustration, here's what I see the desired changes are to the first paragraph:


 * Bin He is an accomplished American biomedical engineering scientist. He is the D d epartment H  h head of Biomedical Engineering, as well as professor of Biomedical Engineering, Electrical & Computer Engineering, and Center for Neural Basis of Cognition at Carnegie Mellon University . His research as the director of the Biomedical Functional Imaging and Neuroengineering Labratory focuses on Multimodal Functional Neuroimaging, Functional Neuroimaging, Electrical Properties Imaging, Brain-Computer Interface, and Neuromodulation. Until 2017, He previously served as the director of the Institute for Engineering in Medicine  and the Center for Neuroengineering at the University of Minnesota. He is the Editor in Chief of the IEEE Transactions on Biomedical Engineering. He was the president of the IEEE Engineering in Medicine & Biology Society (EMBS) from 2009 to 2010.

Of which I am doing the following: —C.Fred (talk) 16:58, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Correcting capitalization of "department head"
 * Adding "the" before "Institute for Engineering in Medicine"

Requested edit
==Bin He== Bin He is an accomplished American biomedical engineering scientist. He is the D d epartment H  h head of Biomedical Engineering, as well as professor of Biomedical Engineering, Electrical & Computer Engineering, and Center for Neural Basis of Cognition at Carnegie Mellon University. His research as the director of the Biomedical Functional Imaging and Neuroengineering Labratory focuses on Multimodal Functional Neuroimaging, Functional Neuroimaging, Electrical Properties Imaging, Brain-Computer Interface, and Neuromodulation. Until 2017, He previously served as the director of the Institute for Engineering in Medicine and the Center for Neuroengineering at the University of Minnesota. He is the Editor in Chief of the IEEE Transactions on Biomedical Engineering. He was the president of the IEEE Engineering in Medicine & Biology Society (EMBS) from 2009 to 2010.

==Biography== Bin He received his BS in 1982 in electrical engineering, from Zhejiang University, Hangzhou, China. He later went to study in Japan and obtained his M.S. in electrical engineering and PhD (highest honors) in bioelectrical engineering from the Tokyo Institute of Technology, a Nobel Prize–winning campus.[2]

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In January 2004, He became the Professor of Biomedical Engineering, Electrical Engineering, and Neuroscience at the University of Minnesota, Minneapolis. He also served as the founding director of Center for Neuroengineering at Minnesota. From 2004 to 2018 Dr. He served as Professor of Biomedical Engineering, Electrical Engineering, and Neuroscience at the University of Minnesota, Minneapolis, where he founded the Biomedical Functional Imaging and Neuroengineering Labratory. In February 2018, He became the Department Head of the Department of Biomedical Engineering at Carnegie Mellon University. He leads the Biomedical Functional Imaging and Neuroengineering Laboratory, which was founded at the University of Minnesota and relocated to Carnegie Mellon University in 2018. Since From 2011 to 2018, He served as director of NSF IGERT Training Program on Systems Neuroengineering. In August 2012, He was named director of the Institute for Engineering in Medicine, a campus-wide research institute aimed at advancing innovative engineering solutions for tomorrow's medicine, by fostering collaborations between biomedical colleges and College of Science and Engineering at the University of Minnesota.

==Honors and recognitions== His work has been featured by a number of major media and publications, including Nature (journal), New York Times, BBC, CNN, NBC, CBS, ABC News, Washington Post, The Economist, Scientific American, New Scientist, Fox News, and US News, among others.

Selected Honors and Recognition include:

IEEE Biomedical Engineering Award, 2017

Fellow, Biomedical Engineering Society, 2017

Academic Career Achievement Award, IEEE Engineering in Medicine and Biology Society, 2015

Distinguished Service Award, IEEE Engineering in Medicine and Biology Society, 2014

Outstanding Research Award, International Federation of Clinical Neurophysiology, 2012

Fellow, International Academy of Medical and Biological Engineering, 2012

Medtronic-Bakken Chair for Engineering in Medicine, 2012

President, IEEE Engineering in Medicine and Biology Society (EMBS), 2009 - 2010

Distinguished McKnight University Professorship, 2009

President, International Society for Functional Source Imaging, 2007-2008

Fellow, American Institute of Medical and Biological Engineering, 2005

Fellow, IEEE, 2004

President, International Society of Bioelectromagnetism, 2002-2005

American Heart Association Established Investigator Award, 2001

National Science Foundation CAREER Award, 1999

University of Illinois University Scholar Award, 1999

Reply 14-MAR-2018
Biographies provided by institutions with a connection to the subject are not WP:RS. As such, the majority of what is requested is unreferenced.      Spintendo       17:30, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

Add References
Can you please just add the following references to the article to provide more inline citations? The published article has a misformatted reference.

Carnegie Adds Bin He as department head of BME:

Bin He is editor in chief of transactions on biomedical engineering:

Bin He was president of EMBS:

Biography of Bin He:

Biomedical Functional Imaging and Neuroengineering laboratory at University of Minnesota:

NSF IGERT AWARD

Bin He New CMU department head

Bin He Experience in Brain Mapping

Bin He featured in BBC

Bin He featured in New York Times

IEEE Biomedical Engineering Award 2017

IEEE Academic Career Achievement Award

Jstieger.3 (talk) 19:03, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

Reply quotebox with inserted reviewer decisions and feedback 14-MAR-2018
Below you will see where text from your request has been quoted and individual advisory messages – either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposals – have been inserted underneath each major proposal. Please see the Notes section at the bottom of the quotebox for additional information about each request.      Spintendo       22:31, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

Proposed changes
1.	In the External links section, the first link Biography of Bin He at Carnegie Mellon University (https://web.archive.org/web/20180314042812/http:/www.bme.cmu.edu/people/faculty2.html#He) is an outdated link for CMU BME website. Please remove it. Instead, you can use this one: https://www.cmu.edu/bme/People/Faculty/profile/bhe.html 2.	Since Prof. He moved from the University of Minnesota to Carnegie Mellon, the link that refers to the University of Minnesota is not working and should be removed as well: https://twin-cities.umn.edu/~binhe/bhe.htm. Please remove this link from the References and External links section. 3.	It would be helpful if the link to his publications to be placed in the Publications section: https://www.cmu.edu/bme/helab/Publications/index.html. 4.	Also, his recent major achievements are listed here: a.	Prof. Bin He honored with IEEE EMBS William J. Morlock Award: https://www.cmu.edu/bme/News_Events/story_archive/bhe_embs_morlock_award.html, https://engineering.cmu.edu/news-events/mentions.html (He wins IEEE Morlock Award for Excellence in Biomedical Technology) b.	First-ever noninvasive mind-controlled robotic arm: https://engineering.cmu.edu/news-events/news/2019/06/20-he-sci-robotics.html; Paper in Science Robotics: https://robotics.sciencemag.org/content/4/31/eaaw6844 c.	“Push-pull” dynamic in brain network is key to stopping seizures: https://engineering.cmu.edu/news-events/news/2019/09/23-he-annals-neurology.html; Paper in Annals of Neurology: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1002/ana.25583 5.	Prof. he hosted the second forum in Biomedical Engineering professionals under the roof of Carnegie Mellon: https://www.cmu.edu/bme/bmeforum/, https://engineering.cmu.edu/news-events/news/2019/09/18-bme-forum.html 6.	Recent social media mentions: https://twitter.com/aimbe/status/1192833853016199173, https://twitter.com/cmu_bme/status/1192557764402388993, https://twitter.com/CMUEngineering/status/1176236668191420416, 7.	Some edits in the introduction part: Bin He (https://www.cmu.edu/bme/People/Faculty/profile/bhe.html) is an accomplished American biomedical engineering (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Biomedical_engineering) scientist. Professor He is the Department Head of Biomedical Engineering (https://engineering.cmu.edu/news-events/magazine/spring-2018/new-bme-dept-head-arrives.html) as well as professor of Biomedical Engineering (https://www.cmu.edu/bme/index.html), Electrical & Computer Engineering (https://www.ece.cmu.edu/), and Center for Neural Basis of Cognition (http://www.cnbc.cmu.edu/) at Carnegie Mellon University (https://www.cmu.edu/). Prior to joining Biomedical Engineering department at Carnegie Mellon, Professor Bin He was Distinguished McKnight University Professor of Biomedical Engineering and Medtronic-Bakken Endowed Chair for Engineering in Medicine at the University of Minnesota (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Minnesota). He served as the director of the Institute for Engineering in Medicine (https://www.iem.umn.edu/) and the Center for Neuroengineering at the University of Minnesota. He is the Editor in Chief of the IEEE Transactions on Biomedical Engineering. He was the president of the IEEE Engineering in Medicine & Biology Society (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IEEE_Engineering_in_Medicine_and_Biology_Society)(EMBS) from 2009 to 2010 (https://www.embs.org/about-embs/organization/past-officers/).

Kadrina5313 (talk) 19:07, 3 January 2020 (UTC)

Reply 3-JAN-2020
Regards, Spintendo  02:49, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) ✅ The outdated links were updated.
 * 2) ❌ The remainder of the request could not be implemented because the verbatim text that is requested to be removed has not been indicated. Only the replacement text to be added was given. Both need to be included with the request.

11 March 2020
•	The page has been massively modified in January and February 2020 to meet the maintenance template requirements for it to be removed as it does not create a positive impression of Prof. He’s page.

•	By this, I am declaring COI and I would like to ask independent writers to take a look and make additional edits if needed. •	Happy to cooperate with the writers to remove the maintenance template. Let me know if additional information might be needed. Kadrina5313 (talk) 15:09, 11 March 2020 (UTC)

Reply 19-MAR-2020

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Regards, Spintendo  13:38, 19 March 2020 (UTC)
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