Talk:Binsted/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bungle (talk · contribs) 22:19, 23 January 2017 (UTC)

Reviewed this version from 5th January 2017

Summary
Similar type of interesting article as Winslade but with many of the same niggles/issues that can be easily addressed. Also have the same concerns about broadness, particularly regarding demography, culture/community and education which can be added and/or expanded upon. Will allow for an initial week for improvements but can be extended if editing is still ongoing by that time. Bungle (talk • contribs) 18:17, 24 January 2017 (UTC)

Comment
Is the reviewer aware that reference 2 refers to an article on Binstead, a place with a similar name on the Isle of Wight? J3Mrs (talk) 16:37, 26 January 2017 (UTC)
 * When I looked at the reference, it mentions about the history of Hampshire which is where the article in question is, however on closer reading, it does indeed appear to be referencing to an almost identically named town? It may well throw the article integrity into question as alot of the content is based around this reference. Bungle (talk • contribs) 16:49, 26 January 2017 (UTC)
 * In light of the discovery by J3Mrs and given a vast amount of the history section, as well as other parts relying on this incorrect reference for content, it doesn't seem appropriate to keep the article in hold as large amounts will require an entire rewrite. With it being an article of modest size, I was inclined to keep it on hold until correct data had been found, but then fundamentally it'd be a different article and as such should be subject to a new review. I'd be happy to undertake this if you correct the data and renominate, as well as addressing the other points I raised which were not connected to this reference error. Bungle (talk • contribs) 17:43, 26 January 2017 (UTC)
 * I hadn't realised this; upon a closer look it appears that Binsted (mainland Hampshire) doesn't have an entry in British History Online. I'll still address the non-related issues in this review, and will let you know once I have found an alternative source. Thanks for taking this review! JAG  UAR   17:48, 26 January 2017 (UTC)
 * I've removed anything related to the incorrect source in the article now and will try to implement alternatives. JAG  UAR   17:52, 26 January 2017 (UTC)

I think I've managed to address all of your concerns—would you mind taking a look? Unfortunately I couldn't find an entry on Binsted in the Hampshire Treasures collection, but I managed to expand it somewhat using the existing source from the parish council's website. I've also expanded and improved the geography section, using the correct figures this time! The parish covers far more than I previously thought. I'll renominate this straight away. I think the Isle of Wight was part of Hampshire when the source was published, so no wonder I got confused with "Binstead"! JAG UAR   18:39, 26 January 2017 (UTC)