Talk:Biological determinism/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 14:23, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 08:07, 15 June 2024 (UTC)


 * refers to the supposedly => to the supposed
 * Done.
 * Doesn't sound right
 * Edited.
 * Better phrasing needed; forcibly and supposedly are the main issues, along with the two "by"
 * Edited.
 * Brought in? Should be enacted
 * Too British for you, probably. Said 'enacted'.
 * Should be US for a more global audience
 * Edited.
 * Cite 8 needs page nos.
 * Added.
 * Cite 14 needs page nos.
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 * Cite 24 needs page nos.
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 * Cite 25 needs page nos.
 * Added.

This article is small, so not much to nitpick at. An interesting read and should be promoted in no time. When all is done, I'd appreciate a review of one of my articles in the Biology and medicine section. Best, Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 20:41, 15 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:46, 15 June 2024 (UTC)