Talk:Biota of Tokyo Imperial Palace

WP:Japan Assessment Commentary
The article was rated Start-class, for lack of sufficient in-line citations, lack of clarity at a few points, and deficiencies in grammar & punctuation. Other than those three things, this is a pretty impressive article. However, from the beginning, the Lead is confusing on one point: Does "Biota of Tokyo Imperial Palace" refer to a separate work or catalog of all the organisms in the gardens, or does it refer to the article itself? Boneyard90 (talk) 19:59, 20 May 2012 (UTC)


 * I think the first sentence needs to define the term Biota to make this clear. Lineslarge (talk) 13:01, 22 May 2012 (UTC)


 * I wonder if the name should be changed to read "Biota of the Tokyo Imperial Palace Grounds." Student7 (talk) 12:30, 23 May 2012 (UTC)


 * I tried to clarify the point. It this clear enough? --Bugandhoney (talk) 22:58, 29 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Yes, it is. Thank you. Boneyard90 (talk) 01:58, 30 May 2012 (UTC)