Talk:Birds-1/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Mention Japan's involvement in the lead.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Nigeria has a background with satellites," Nigerian engineers and scientists?
 * More the government, since they contracted it out. Changed to that.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Sometimes MongolSat-1 is referred to as Mongolia's first satellite, but it was launched by Bermuda-based company ABS and built by U.S. company Boeing. It was co-branded as MongolSat-1 after launch. Birds-1 successfully launched the first satellite for Bangladesh, Ghana, Mongolia, and Nigeria."
 * Added  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "as part of the Joint Global Multi-Nation Birds Satellite project, which is a cross-border interdisciplinary satellite project for non-spacefaring countries supported by Japan" No need to mention the project twice.
 * Fixed, I think.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "The satellites communicate with seven ground stations: one in each of the countries participating in the Birds-1 program, and one each in Thailand and Taiwan. The satellites all use the same radio frequency." Make sure no consecutive sentences start with the same words.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Link the countries in the Future work section.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Dates are not consistent in the references.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Jack Fischer's tweet ref should include his name, link to his article, and tweet inside the title of the text. Look at the Cite tweet's example section.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:31, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. Let me know if you have further comments.  Kees08  (Talk)   04:37, 8 May 2018 (UTC)