Talk:Birthday (Selena Gomez song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 19:44, 1 August 2013 (UTC)


 * We have some external links to correct.


 * Infobox
 * The track wasn't released as a single, and can't have a separate release date from Stars Dance.
 * I don't think it's necessary to note that the YouTube link points to her channel.


 * Introduction
 * "Recorded by American recording artist" – Remove the first 'recorded'.
 * "Produced by by" – Remove one of the 'by's.


 * Background and recording
 * No issues.


 * Composition
 * I'd mention that "Hollaback Girl" is also a Stefani song, some people might not know that.
 * Wikilink to Icona Pop's "I Love It".


 * Critical reception and music video
 * Split into two separate sections.
 * "Upon release" – "Upon its release"
 * Un-capitalize the 'd' in 'dirty'.
 * "The songs lyrics... the songs panting" – "The song's lyrics, the song's panting"
 * "Intersped" – "Interspersed"


 * Charts
 * I couldn't find "Birthday" in the South Korean chart, could you please link to the specific week?


 * Track listing
 * No issues.


 * References
 * Only printed references are supposed to be italicized.
 * Fill out a couple bare URLs.
 * Ref 1: The publisher for Allmusic is Rovi Corporation.
 * Ref 2: Wikilink Metacritic.
 * Ref 3: The publisher for Billboard is Prometheus Global Media.
 * Ref 6: Wikilink Soundcloud.
 * Ref 19: Wikilink MTV.

Just those minor tweaks and we'll be good to go! WikiRedactor (talk) 20:05, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay all issues have been addressed :)--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 21:25, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Passed. Good work! WikiRedactor (talk) 21:32, 1 August 2013 (UTC)