Talk:Bisexual literature

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Good evaluation, Celia, particularly on the need for better sources for citations. Jlbrandt (talk) 20:09, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

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Peer Review - Kayla Jones
Overall, I'm very impressed with the amount of work you've put into this page!! It looks great so far. Here are some of my notes:

Kaylac8215 (talk) 16:47, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Add more to the lead that explains the article: A little on the background, some info on publishers, etc.
 * THe second sentence in "overview," "Though bisexuality..." feels like a run on sentence. Maybe split it up some. "Fanny Hill. The mid..." It reads very confusingly and when I got to the section later on discussing the Pre-1900s, I was very confused.
 * "was understood contemporaries by his contemporaries..." in the pre-1900 section doesn't make sense.
 * Need a citation for "modern adaptations" of Dorian Gray
 * "Bisexual characters...Giovanni's Room." - maybe reformat the sentence. It reads awkwardly
 * 1990s - more citations, especially in last sentence.
 * Good information on the publishers!!
 * Citations needed in Children & Young adult
 * Maybe include a section detailing the need for positive images of bisexuality? Like journal articles or whatever that proves why it is necessary to include. How the negative representations harm individuals who are bisexual.
 * "A recent example..." can become outdated. Maybe use a different word like the year. - Under fantasy