Talk:Bisher Amin Khalil al-Rawi

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I am making some edits to correc the POV and grammar. Please feel free to comment. Joaquin Murietta 22:51, 18 October 2005 (UTC)


 * Just a few points:


 * 1) Bisher Amin Khalil al-Rawi is refered to as Bisher for short, unless his name is quoted by someone who doesn't know better. Read the Guardian's reports: they almost always get the name right.
 * 2) Facts should be presented as facts: 'Bisher contends that he was arrested by the..': he must have been arrested, and we've got a good idea who did the arresting -> write 'Bisher was arrested by...'.
 * 3) Write facts and claims in separate sentences: this makes the division between the two more clear.
 * 4) It is reasonable to report what Bisher's tribunal said. We've linked to the report, so it seems fair that we report it.
 * 5) I think major rewrites should be explained.
 * --Gareth Hughes 23:32, 18 October 2005 (UTC)


 * I like your edit better than mine. Thanks! Joaquin Murietta 00:01, 19 October 2005 (UTC)

Replaced transcluded image with inline image - npov tag as per dispute on Template talk:Combatant Status Review Tribunal trailer image and caption
Replaced transcluded image with inline image - npov tag as per dispute on Template talk:Combatant Status Review Tribunal trailer image and caption. Geo Swan 15:08, 24 September 2007 (UTC)

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