Talk:Bisram Khan

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this new article, but note that other editors have raised issues with how it is written. In short, the article has little more than a basic announcement of the man's existence centuries ago. More context is needed for an encyclopedic article. For pointers, follow the links in the notice at the top of the article..

---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 19:54, 31 August 2020 (UTC)