Talk:Björk/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk · contribs) 17:32, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Gah - oh well. Although I believe you forgot to fail the article. What a pro. (talk) 13:48, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * There are too many short paragraphs consisting of only a sentence or two. Many sections lack direction and focus.
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * There are many deadlinks that may have fallen prey to WP:linkrot
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * There are many, many sentences that need citations. Some are marked, but I feel like I'm spending too much time locating them when some of the content may not even be worth keeping.
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * It might be too broad
 * B. Focused:
 * There are too many unnecessary details here, which really bog the article down and somewhat obscure her more notable accomplishments
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * I think there may be too many details coming from a fan's viewpoint.
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Sorry, but this article still needs a lot of work to get to GA. -- Tea with toast  (話)  19:09, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Sorry, but this article still needs a lot of work to get to GA. -- Tea with toast  (話)  19:09, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but this article still needs a lot of work to get to GA. -- Tea with toast  (話)  19:09, 22 December 2011 (UTC)