Talk:BlackBerry Electron

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This article, just like most Blackberry-related articles, is written like a product advertisement. Someone should fix this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 184.162.62.123 (talk) 00:16, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. RichardOSmith (talk) 17:15, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks, did fix it.-- Faizan Munawar Varyachat contributions 13:31, 15 October 2012 (UTC)

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How to fix article
How should we fix this article? I know we should be less detailed in the stats, but what should we replace them with? Or we could merge this into BlackBerry... King of  Scorpions  16:02, 11 February 2020 (UTC)