Talk:Black (2005 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The source for the poster links to Pinterest, a non-reliable source, so I would swap it for something else.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * That being said, the rest of the poster's non-free rationale is in excellent shape.
 * I also couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
 * "he meet several" "he met several"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "to made another" "to make another"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "written by Bhansali, Bhavani Iyer".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Principal photography of Black was done by Ravi K. Chandran in 100 days, from mid-January to April 2004, and took place in Shimla and Mumbai's film studio complex Film City. He used cinematography style from the 1959 film Kaagaz Ke Phool." "Principal photography of Black was done by Ravi K. Chandran in 100 days, using the cinematography style from the 1959 film Kaagaz Ke Phool, from mid-January to April 2004, taking place in Film City, Shimla and Mumbai's film studio complex."
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "budget around" "budget of around"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "With a total grossing" "With a total gross"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Best Actor for Bachchan".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * "after recovered" "after recovering"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Debraj (an elderly alcoholic teacher) enters" "Debraj, an elderly alcoholic teacher, enters"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "when he see" "when he sees"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "back to be insolent" "back to being insolent"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure whether Indian English uses the ending "se" or "ze", but if its the second one, change "recognise" to "recognize" and "vocalise" to "vocalize".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "a expressive woman, and is even able to dance" "an expressive woman who is even able to dance"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Plot section is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * No issues with cast.

Production

 * "Hindi film ever" "Hindi films ever"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "he would quoted" "he would say"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "In an interview to" "In an interview with"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "inspired from" "inspired by"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "As a gratitude" "As gratitude"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Bachchan take a hiatus" "Bachchan took a hiatus"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "To prepare his part" "To prepare for his part"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "a special training" "special training"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "he did an extensive research" "he did extensive research"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "what happen" "what happens"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "physical disability" "physical disabilities"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "an theatre actress" "a theatre actress"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "produced, financed".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "sure for it" "sure about it"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "lot monochromatic" "lot of monochromatic"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "khaki".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "between 1950s" "between the 1950s"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "were chose" "were chosen"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "highest-paid actors in Bollywood".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "film in his career" "films in his career"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "he shoot a film" "he shot a film"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "promised to collaborated" "promised to collaborate"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "filmed is the" "filmed was the"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Mukerji stretch out her hand when snow starts to fall" "Mukerji stretching out her hand when snow begins to fall"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Media reported" "The media reported"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "would ended" "would end"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "mostly of the set" "most of the set"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "resulting a shooting" "resulting in a shooting"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "for did not return 390" "for not returning 390"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Deputy Chief Minister" "the Deputy Chief Minister"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Soundtrack

 * "Armenian instrument" "the Armenian instrument"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * "film had a good" "film had good"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "was coincided" "coincided"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "28 August 2009 in" "28 August 2009 on"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "a non-Korean films" "a non-Korean film"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Black has been screened" "Black was screened"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Prime Video since" "Prime Video in"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * "mostly critics" "most critics"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Box office

 * Add a comma after "the Netherlands".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Accolades

 * "win the all four" "win all four"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Best Actor".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)