Talk:Black Clauchrie House

Advertorial?
I was about to edit the sentence about accomodation on the basis that it reads a little too much like a commercial (I.e. 'offers accommodation for up to 16 people' etc.) I'm sure it's factually accurate, but not that it adds value to the article.

Suggested wording is:

"Today, the house offers accommodation for short breaks and holidays and is used for weddings, large parties and events."

As it's a new-ish article I thought I'd err on the side of caution. P.S. Happy times spent there - looking forward to the C4 programme. Pimdip (talk) 17:52, 5 January 2009 (UTC)


 * I create the article, and i'd be happy with your suggested re-wording, i do agree that the accommodation sentence does seem a bit adverty! Bleaney (talk) 19:42, 5 January 2009 (UTC)