Talk:Black Friday (2004 film)/GA1

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Reviewer: Veera Narayana (talk · contribs) 17:00, 5 January 2019 (UTC)

Yes. I am reviewing this. Comments to follow. Veera Narayana 17:00, 5 January 2019 (UTC)

Nice work on this, mostly spotless, but need some clarity on the following:
 * "Kashyap then suggested to director Aditya Bhattacharya that he make it into a film. When Kashyap told him he felt there was a film to be made about the event, Bhattacharya gave it to him to direct." -- Here, what i understood was that Kashyap offered Bhattacharya this script to direct, who instead suggested that Kashyap did it. If i was right, please tweak this line into something simpler and rather straight to the point.
 * Done


 * What Newstrack was exactly?
 * Can you point me towards it?


 * We have already introduced Aditya Bhattacharya as the supposed director of the TV series. Why go after his full name again and again?
 * Fixed


 * Coming to the image, despite being an outsider, i can say that Mumbai has more than one major slum that is Dharavi, like say, Kamatipura? Which slum are you referring to in the image?
 * Dharavi is the biggest slum in Asia and several scenes of the film were shot here.


 * When you wikilink anything in the references, be uniform. Either link everything in the first instance of many, or don't link any.
 * Done.

I have hopefully resolved the above queries. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:26, 7 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Well done. Promoted. Veera Narayana 07:27, 8 January 2019 (UTC)