Talk:Black Sunday (1960 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 23:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:17, 17 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Here and in the rest of the article, films should have year dates after their first mention.
 * Done. I didn't add the years to ones where the title is re-used or the year is noted earlier in a sentence. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:17, 17 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the commas after "in 1961", "United Kingdom", and "reviews in Italy".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:17, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * Plot is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Remove the commas after "vows revenge" and "of her life".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)


 * I think "cricifix" might be a typo.
 * Indeed it is. Fixed. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "beauty restored".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Is there a reason why the "credits adapted" sentence is small?
 * Not that I know of. I've restored it back to normal size. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * Remove the comma after "film of his own".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "being around" "was around" (to remove the double use of "being")
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The word "bares" might be another typo.
 * Changed phrasing. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "unsatisfactory".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add commas after "Choma Kruvajan", "Khoma Brut", "Bachelor of Hearts (1958)"
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "travelled" "traveled" (consistency)
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the commas after "later in life", "cast in bronze", "scenes together", "George Higgins III", and "Andrej and Kruvajan".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "scene which" "scene in which"
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * "licence" "license" (consistency)
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * This section looks good.

Legacy and influence

 * "materialised" "materialized" (consistency)
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)