Talk:Black War/Archive 1

Wrong governor?
I think the caption is wrong on the poster in this article- I think its actually Governor Davey's proclamation to the Aborigines from 1816, not Gov. Arthurs - as seen in this image which shows the top of the posterAstrokey44 10:33, 27 October 2005 (UTC)


 * Good find, Robert Hughes' The Fatal Shore implies that it is part of George Arthur's Black War campaign. Can't trust even sources now! --203.52.130.137 08:53, 27 November 2005 (UTC)

Genocide
Is Geoncide the right word to describe the "Black Wars". Especially because many of the deaths attributed to this period are through disease? Or do you mean to imply that the diseases were in fact biological weapons? ```` —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 61.68.139.237 (talk • contribs). 02:09, May 7, 2006 (UTC)


 * While it can certainly be argued that it was not genocide, it is also quite clear that many do consider it to be genocide. older ≠ wiser 03:16, 7 May 2006 (UTC)

Please can we have a WP:V reliable and reputable source, for who has claimed it to be a genocide. --Philip Baird Shearer 03:04, 29 May 2006 (UTC)


 * How about these for starters:
 * Here we have a discussion of historian Keith Windschuttle dismissal of "the conventional thinking on what's been is widely-accepted as one of the darkest moments in Australian history, the genocide of Tasmanian Aborigines".
 * Turnbull, Clive (1948) Black War: The Extermination of the Tasmanian Aborigines. Melbourne and London: F.W. Cheshire.
 * This may or may not be a reliable source, but it discusses the Black War in the context of other genocides.
 * This is almost certainly not a reliable source, but gives some evidence to it being commonplace to consider it as genocide.
 * This seems reputable. Minogue is apparently reluctant to use the label genocide, although the site editors seem to want to push that angle. Part of a multi-part series sparked by Windschuttle's publications.
 * Yet another discussion of Windschuttle supposed debunking of among other things, Tasmanian genocide.
 * http://www.yale.edu/gsp/colonial/Madley.pdf "Patterns of frontier genocide 1803–1910: the Aboriginal Tasmanians, the Yuki of California, and the Herero of Namibia" by Benjamin Madley in the Journal of Genocide Research (2004), 6(2), June, 167–192
 * "Modern by analogy: modernity, Shoah and the Tasmanian genocide" by Jesse Shipway in the Journal of Genocide Research (2005), 7(2), June, 205-219


 * All of these were gathered without even trying very hard. Many, many more comparable sources are available. older ≠ wiser 04:20, 29 May 2006 (UTC)

It is not on the talk page that they are needed, it is in the article. Why not pick a few of the most "reputable" and weave them into the text? I ask this because I am trying to clean up the Genocides in history page and I would like to include sources for all the Genocides mentioned and currently this one does not have any either on the Genocides in history section or this article to substanciate the claim that it was a genocide. As I am no expert on this episode it is much better if someone who is selects the references to be cited and as the page already reports on the History wars (an article I had not seen until I read this page) it would be helpful if it was a balanced NPOV paragraph.

Also do those respectable sources that state that the Black War it was a genocide, define the genocide in terms of the UN Convention on the Prevention and Punishment of the Crime of Genocide, or do they use a different definition like those described in Genocide? --Philip Baird Shearer 09:27, 29 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Aha, now you're asking something more difficult--I thought you were following up on the anon's earlier question which was accompanied by an article edit to remove the word genocide. There's no question that it is commonly described as a genocide--that is one of the primary bases for Windschuttle's book. As to whether it actually meets that standard for some specific definition of genocide (or even whether Windschuttle was right in claiming earlier historians exaggerated the genocidal aspects of the conflict)--well that is a different matter altogether and one that I'm not qualified to venture an opinion about. I'm only casually familiar with the topic and not ready to go digging into secondary sources at this time. older ≠ wiser 11:59, 29 May 2006 (UTC)

Bad taste
I believe its extraordinarily naive and bad taste to have a genocidal one sided progrom in a military history project - somebody didnt read the article when they put that on! SatuSuro 23:36, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

This entire article flies in the face of Australian history. It appears to be a concoction of Left Wing hate of their own people. The Diaries of Oxley from 1803 (not mid? 1820s to 1830s wrong dates) are still available on micro fiche. This lie (entire article and "Black War" reference is all Lies. Australia did have a record of events from Day 1 of settlement. We had Journalists and every level of reporting from every level of Public Service from convicts to Police to Senior Public Servants, to Journalists and Newspaper reporters on "both sides" of Politics, all the way to the Monarchy. If someone falsified a report, like this ridiculous document in it entirety, they would be gaoled, whipped with "cat of nine tails", hung or if they were lucky exiled. Take this vile lies and hate down from Wiki — Preceding unsigned comment added by 49.197.40.179 (talk)

Nearly all information is missing
Nearly all information is missing. Who? By whom? Weapons? What? where? how? when (stated to some extent)? Andries (talk) 20:05, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Intro, wrong word used
The conflict resulted in the complete obliteration of the Tasmanian Aboriginal population. None of the present day descendants of the handful of Tasmanian Aboriginal survivors are full blooded, and the native culture and language has been irrevocably lost.

I understand the point the lead is attempting to make however the language used doesnt really support it. The war resulted in obliteration, which means that everything was wiped out. However it then states there was a handful of survirors - it would be more accurate to state the near obliteration of the people or the obliteration of their society etc--EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 11:54, 23 June 2009 (UTC)


 * The reason the lead says complete annihilation is because the survivors were herded into a camp, where they promptly died off. The only real survivors in the strict sense of leaving progeny were slaves and collaborators, who bore half-white children. The last full blooded native Tasmanian died in 1876 (despite some attempts to pin the label on the half-white last speaker of an Aboriginal language).Likebox (talk) 20:19, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Newspaper Obscure
Just a minor comment about the newspaper quote. It's a little obscure. Are the editors proposing the preservation of the native populace or that they should be extermininated? Both can be concluded depending on the reading of the statement. I suspect given the general slant of Australian/Western history it is a cry for exterminating untermenchen but I could be mistaken. This really should be clarified. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.25.141.7 (talk) 09:36, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

At the time of the newspaper article, settlers in the more remote areas had been suffering from frequent raids by Aborigines, often involving the Aborigines approaching settlers in an apparently friendly manner and then suddenly turning on them and killing them. There had been a number of killings of helpless women and children as well as the killing of settlers known to have treated Aborigines particularly well, so there was a certain amount of outrage about it. The newspaper article came at a time when all sorts of proposals were being made as to how to end the hostilities, generally involving separating the 'combatants' by forcing the Aborigines away from the settled areas into some sort of reservation on a peninsula or island. With very few exceptions, published records of opinions in the colony show that most settlers were in favour of action being taken to BOTH preserve the Aborigines AND end the murder of settlers. I'm pretty sure that is what the newspaper was demanding. Webley442 (talk) 08:03, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

I attempted to add a clarification saying just that (i think it was from the 28th aug) but someone deleted it. they claimed it was uncited, whereas it was putting that very citation in the context of the article from which it came User:Geoff82

Cut and paste from article
The paragraph below was cut and pasted from article to here .. for discussion .. noting that it appears to be more detailed than would expect in the summary beginning to an encyclopedic article .. and seeing the same subject matter (though difference detail) is already covered in the article below:   Bruceanthro (talk) 12:32, 23 September 2009 (UTC)

"One well-documented strategy utilised by British settlers to attempt to attack and defeat the Tasmanian Aborigines is known as the Black Line'', which involved situating participating troopers and settlers in a line across the island, then moving the line from the northeast to the southwest in an attempt to corner the Aboriginal population in southern Tasmania, a task made difficult by the terrain, the Aborigines' intimate knowledge of it and their skill at concealment. The Black Line was a failure, however, capturing only one old Aboriginal man and a disabled boy, both of whom escaped almost immediately thereafter, and also causing the deaths by shooting of two other Aborigines. The attempt also resulted in the deaths of five troopers accidentally shot by their fellow troopers." Flood, Dr Josephine, The Original Australians: Story of the Aboriginal People, Allen & Unwin, 2006 p86 ''

Revisionist
I've removed the term 'revisionist' which had been used to characterise Plomley in the introductory paragraph. While technically 'revisionist' can refer to a positive act in historical work, eg correcting past mistakes or false interpretations, recently it is generally only used in the sense of 'Historical revisionism (negationism)', ie as in Holocaust revisionists. So it seems inappropriate on that count alone. Aside from which, Plomley was working in the 1960's, publishing Robinson's journals for the first time before the 'it was genocide', 'all those atrocity stories are absolutely true, no question' mentality started to develop (in the late 70's & into the 80's) regarding what happened in Tasmania. He wasn't 'revising' anything.Webley442 (talk) 22:43, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

Keith Windschuttle
Perhaps it is neccessary to include a greater mention of his work. The current reference is unacceptable, as Windschuttle not only 'challenged' but disproved many of the previuos claims. Maximus Meridius 04:20, 11 July 2006 (UTC)

I intend to read the rebuttal Whitewash, but it will have to be damn good to answer Windschuttle's claimsGeoff82

He should not be listed as an 'historian' by the way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.78.56.174 (talk) 04:38, 18 May 2013 (UTC)

Links
Maybe we should trim the Windschuttle links, as they're more about the book rather than the actual article? Jgritz 14:11, 23 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I studied Australian History, my Family arriving on the First Fleet. Keith Windshuttle gives an accurate account of Australian History. The myth and lie makers come from Monash University and specifically students and cohorts of Robert Manne who paid $50,000 for the best concoction concerning the "Bringing them Home Report". There is not even "middle ground" the myths and lies have become so overwhelming it can only be deduced “Monash and Manne” are the Anti-Christ of Australian History and an example is "The Meralite Boat" article now edited. In that article two Aboriginal children in South Australia walked to the NT coast to swap and trade "Hairstring and Thermo plastic (ear wax)” for a Meralite Boat from Islanders, Lake Ayre had filled with water and the Tribe wanted a boat. No wheel, no Cart, no horse, no beasts of burden, two naked children on foot carrying enough Thermoplastic and Hairstring to Trade for a boat, which they carried back. Apparently all the Aboriginals on the NT Coast were “hairless”. No pot to piss in and all by foot. I think Robert Manne originally gave a Medal for that concoction then like Australian history, covered it all up. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 49.197.40.179 (talk)

Colonial Times article
It appears as though the Colonial Times article was misrepresented. The newspaper was NOT calling upon citizens to hunt down and kill aborigines like animals in the name of self defence. If you read the entire article (as I have done) you will see that the Times is merely explaining what is already going on - namely that settlers are killing Aborigines while defending themselves. The Times article then points out that the only real solution is to exile them all to King Island - a precursor to the 1830 decision to send them off to Flinders Island.

Of course I'm reasonably aware of the issues surrounding this piece of history and I can assure people that my editing here is not based upon revisionism but upon fact. Read the Colonial Times article for yourself (the whole first column and the beginning of the second one) and you will see that they were not calling upon the people of Tasmania to kill aborigines. From a political standpoint the article is still reasonably racist but it is more in tune with the idea that Bass Strait exile would be the solution. Sadly this solution didn't end up working either.

--One Salient Oversight (talk) 07:42, 31 December 2011 (UTC) It seems that everyone can be denied these days in the new "Age of Enlightment" we live in. Save ONE major exception- the Jewish Holocaust. The Native American Holocaust? Much worse than the Jewish Holocaust in terms of number of people killed. Yet denying it- or blaming all the deaths on smallpox- is not only permitted but even encouraged. The Tasmanian Holocaust? Much worse than the Jewish Holocaust in terms of proportion of people killed. Yet denying it- or blaming it on smallpox- carries no grave sentence today. In other words- everything can be denied except for the tragedy of those who wield more influence than others. RaduFlorian (talk) 12:35, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

I agree that more context needs to be put around the editorial in 1826. Two settlers had just been murdered and a further five injured. This report of the deaths and injuries also discusses King Island: The discussion had thus been happening in the press over several weeks. (The Hobart Times article is several weeks earlier than the Colonial Times article currently cited.) I don't feel this Wikipedia article quotes its sources effectively. There is bias and it is dealing with original matterial so I feel this is original research, breaching WP:NOR. I think it would be better if this section referenced a reputable history rather than excerpting bits from contemporary newspaper discussions. --121.214.61.133 (talk) 05:17, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
 * just to clarify, the No original research policy makes clear that quoting primary sources requires a reliable secondary source for interpretation
 * from WP:Nor - Policy: Unless restricted by another policy, primary sources that have been reliably published may be used in Wikipedia; but only with care, because it is easy to misuse them.[4] Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation. A primary source may only be used on Wikipedia to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the source but without further, specialized knowledge. For example, an article about a novel may cite passages to describe the plot, but any interpretation needs a secondary source. Do not analyze, synthesize, interpret, or evaluate material found in a primary source yourself; instead, refer to reliable secondary sources that do so. Do not base an entire article on primary sources, and be cautious about basing large passages on them.
 * --121.214.61.133 (talk) 05:24, 29 August 2013 (UTC)

Genocide category
Monochrome Monitor has included this article on what is evidently a project (and a worthwhile one) to review the suitability of articles included in the Genocides category. I'm sure there are many in that category that arguably shouldn't be, but I'd contend that Black War should remain. The lead section of the article notes that the issue is a subject of debate among historians, but as the Characterisation as genocide section of the article points out, there are some quite reputable historians among those who believe the Black War was indeed an act of genocide. Among those was Raphael Lemkin, the author of the concept of genocide. Lemkin considered Tasmania the site of one of the world's clear cases of genocide. I will reinstate the category but invite comment. BlackCab ( TALK ) 01:25, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Hmmmmm. I definitely see your and lemkin's (whom I greatly respect) point. My concern personally is that it was so limited geographically. Compared to the number of aboriginal australians, I mean, this was very specific to tasmania rather than the mainland. But I suppose it's me always erring towards the "in whole" rather than "in part", a la the armenian genocide and the holocaust rather than the bosnian genocide. This was arguably a utilitarian genocide though. I guess I'm biased against those, too. Utilitarian genocides (on any scale) have been perpetrated by virtually every empire in human history. Ideological genocides however are a more modern phenomenon. --Monochrome _ Monitor  02:52, 20 March 2016 (UTC)

Merge proposal
I am proposing the Black Line article be merged into this article, and a redirect placed at that article. The coverage in the Black War article is probably sufficient, and the Black Line article provides no more detail or information than exists here—certainly not enough to warrant a spinoff article at this stage. BlackCab ( TALK ) 08:41, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Hi BlackCab. Yes, I agree; it's really just a duplication.  Aaroncrick  TALK 11:31, 15 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I agree too and I have redirected. I didn't see any worthwhile content in that article that could be moved here; obviously if there is then it can be moved here. --John (talk) 17:23, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

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Descendents
How can we say there are 'thousands' of descendents when they are of maybe 1/36th aborignality?

The descendents are Aboriginal insofar as they meet the three-part test established under Australian legislation. Sean Parker (talk) 23:29, 12 November 2016 (UTC)

Why was it called the Black War?
It may be obvious to those who know Australian history, but there is nothing on the page explaining why it was called the Black War. Were the Aborigines called "Blacks".

The conflict was described by contemporaries as the 'Black War' because it was conflict with he 'Black natives' of Van Diemens Land - in the language of colonial Tasmania. Calling Tasmanian Aboriginal people 'blacks' or 'natives' is derogatory now but the language of the time is still used to describe the conflict. Sean Parker (talk) 23:33, 12 November 2016 (UTC)

Context of wider colonial campaigns of genocide
Despite the claim that this is "the only true genocide in English colonial history" included in this article, this is demonstrably false. British genocide in the Americas is well known, such as the Beothuk of what is today Newfoundland who were hunted down until there was one survivor, who was put on display as a sort of curiosity. Or the famous Pilgrims of what become New England who butchered the Mystic Indians down to the last and erased (almost) all memory of them, leading most Bostonians to think the "Mystic River" is named in honour of religious conviction. There are examples of this across the British Empire, not to mention the actions of British settler states like the United States. The Black War has to be contextualized clearly as part of a global trend in African and New World settler colonialism.

I mean, guys, even Darwin talks about this. It's old hash. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.51.121.115 (talk) 14:57, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Time for an overhaul
I'm going to embark on an extensive rewrite and expansion of this article, which provides poor coverage for a key part of Tasmanian, and Australian, history.

Working my way from the top:
 * The military conflict template is inappropriate and should simply be removed. Despite the use of "war" in the commonly-used term, the conflict between Tasmanian Aboriginals and European settlers was not a military conflict, despite the involvement of soldiers at different places and times, including the Black Line. As James Boyce notes (Van Diemen's Land, p.205): "Almost all the killing of Aboriginals was done by convicts and former convicts." But nor was it a civil conflict that would warrant the use of the civil conflict or civilian attack templates. Mangerner was not a "commander or leader" over a unified side in the same manner as George Arthur, and since most killings of Aboriginals took place without the knowledge or approval of Arthur, it's ridiculous to suggest Arthur was a "commander" in this "war". He was the governor of the colony in which this conflict was taking place.
 * The article, and lead section, contains no information on causes of the conflict, weapons, tactics, number and identity of the victims, provides no detail on where and when the conflict reached a peak or why it ceased, and also lacks a discussion of historians' difficulty in arriving at definitive statistics on Aboriginal population in 1803 and total Aboriginal casualties.
 * It contains too much detail on the 1804 Risdon Cove massacre and Truganini. Both the Charles Darwin account and HG Wells reference are unnecessary.
 * It lacks coverage of respected historical sources on whether the activities of this period could be described as genocide.
 * The article also makes an arbitrary, and unsourced, assertion that the timespan of the Black War is "best understood" as the period of martial law between 1828 and 1832. The starting point of the "war" has in fact been stated as 1824 (Nicholas Clements, James Boyce, Richard Broome), 1826 (Lyndall Ryan) and 1827 (Henry Reynolds). That range of dates needs to be acknowledged.

I'll start work on this soon but welcome any thoughts. BlackCab ( TALK ) 04:26, 27 February 2015 (UTC)


 * I have uploaded the major part of the rewrite and expansion I embarked on; what remains is a section called "Characterisation as genocide". This will encompass comments by Robert Hughes, Nicholas Clements, Richard Broome and Tom Lawson and possibly others. BlackCab  ( TALK ) 12:24, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
 * An interesting an extensive overhaul on an important part of Tasmanian and Australian history which is largely ignored.  Aaroncrick  TALK 11:32, 15 June 2015 (UTC)
 * An edit today by another user to the military conflict template highlighted the fact that I'd neglected to delete that template as discussed earlier. Despite the term "war", this was not a military conflict. I have now deleted that template. BlackCab  ( TALK ) 02:29, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

The conflict template is perfectly appropriate. As various sources make clear, the events this article covers did involve warfare. Your view that conflicts aren't a 'war' unless they involve formed military units isn't very common these days. Most (if not all) Australian military historians regard the various frontier conflicts to have been warfare, with various authors noting that its important to recognise them as such so as to not obscure the fact that Indigenous Australians fought for their land. Nick-D (talk) 03:19, 25 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Firstly, don't misrepresent my view. I did not say the Black War was not a war. My objection to use of the military conflict infobox template here is twofold: (1) my Oxford dictionary says the military is "relating to or characteristics of soldiers or armed forces .... members of the armed forces, as distinct from civilians and the police." (By contrast it says a "war" is "armed hostilities between especially nations"). With the brief exception of the Black Line and other isolated incidents the military was simply not involved. It was an entirely civilian conflict. (2) As discussed above, the parameters of this template have little relevance to the Black War. The belligerents on one side are listed as "British Empire, Tasmania and United Kingdom" which is nonsense and Governor George Arthur is named as the commander of this force, when he had no such role or intention. Most killings of Aboriginals took place without his knowledge or approval. The other belligerents are named as "Tasmanian Aboriginal Peoples" with that capitalisation. The article accurately describes the conflict between indigenous inhabitants and aggressive, acquisitive settlers; it does not need an inappropriate military template forced on it for the sake of it. BlackCab  ( TALK ) 04:27, 25 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I certainly take your point on the infobox's current content, but that doesn't rule out using it - see for instance how it's used at the Australian frontier wars article, which is probably a good model here. I think that it's a better choice than Template:Infobox civil conflict as this wasn't a 'civil' conflict as appears to be hard-coded into the infobox given that it involved the expansion of British control into Indigenous Australians land. Nick-D (talk) 04:36, 25 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I've just revised the infobox to take the above into account - what do you think? Nick-D (talk) 04:40, 25 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't have the time to compare it with what is on the other frontier wars articles (I'm wikkying while I work) but that seems to work well. Thanks. BlackCab  ( TALK ) 05:15, 25 April 2017 (UTC)
 * cc I removed the military conflict infobox and was referred to this discussion. Inclusion is characterising the events in that way before the article begins, so does the box that selects one set of figures for 'casualties'. Is there an infobox for atrocities committed during invasions, another for the care and consideration given by colonial powers to their new subjects that counters this narrative. Regarding this a some sort of Napoleonic engagement sits well with some authors, others have referred to that as 'white-washing', any boxification is absurdly reductive. cygnis insignis 03:28, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I don't know what your second sentence means and the question of whether colonial powers gave care and consideration to the indigenous people in areas they were colonising is irrelevant. I removed the template back in 2017 but Nick-D argued for it to remain and came up with a compromise that I found reasonable. I'd be interested in the views of any other editors. BlackCab ( TALK ) 05:33, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Apologies where it is not clear, I'm wavering between perplexed and annoyed at any inclusion and compromise. The infobox is reinforcing one challenged pov, academically devastated hypotheses on Tasmanian history (like the article title for that matter), and this derives from a label given in 1865? The military conflict box exists because of course it does, removing it from Emu War saw some very earnest arguments for its defence. My counter examples are attempting to illustrate the absurdity of outlining this as a 'war'. Bonus internet points for a title Black War. No indictment of the content of the article, which I haven't read, but have read enough to know viewing this as an engagement of enemy combatants is at least contentious. cygnis insignis 07:07, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Like it or not, the period of armed conflict between the settlers and the indigenous inhabitants of Tasmania has long been known as the Black War, so the article title reflects that so users can find it. If there is a title that historians and others widely use to describe that period of conflict, then let's discuss it. The military confict box exists because a user argued for its retention after I had removed it in 2017. (See here). I had argued (see above) that it didn't meet the standard definition of a military confict. You can see the response. But I am interested in more opinions. BlackCab ( TALK ) 09:23, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * There's quite a large literature describing this as an armed conflict or war, so the infobox is appropriate. Many modern historians also stress that it's important to note that the frontier wars were in fact wars (especially in light of the older historiography which wrongly portrayed Indigenous Australians as having not attempted to defend their lands). Nick-D (talk) 10:04, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I'd also note that Template:Infobox military conflict includes lots of fields which can be used to cover the non-military aspects of conflicts. These include the fields for results, territorial changes and notes, as well as the details for each of the protagonists. It's fairly flexible. Nick-D (talk) 11:25, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Would seem to make the rest of the content redundant, just some finer details that doesn't address the important. 'It was a war, shit happens'. People resisted being corralled and shot in their own backyard, astonishing! That huge picture is amazing, the way that military historian captured the moment in the conflict, says all you need to know. It's milhist infobox, I know better than to argue against inclusion, how long was one in Emu War with all that earnest and thoughtful support. cygnis insignis 12:02, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I'm doing my best, but I still don't know what any of your last comment means. If it's an attempt at sarcasm, perhaps you could set that aside and engage in a rational discussion to advance a proper argument. BlackCab ( TALK ) 13:30, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Dramatic irony I suppose, but yes, dripping with sarcasm; that can be read as an announcement that I'm too annoyed to be any use and now have a conflict of interest. Good, these events are too horrible for words and I get enough of that looking at extinction events. I'm cursed with seeking NPOV in article space, this was an outburst at reductive, patriarchal and militaristic categorisations. Soldiers, vague government directives, media campaigns, was the Northern territory intervention a military campaign? I dare not look for an article. And again, my objection is primarily to the info box, although I question whether the title emerged from the article or vice versa, what is the scope if the title frames the events as a 'war'. Were G. A. Robinson's action's a military manoeuvre, was he the warden at a POW camp? The notion that it finally credits people with being able to have an opinion and present resistance only glorifies and justifies death and atrocity. The twenty seconds that nearly all readers spend on an article is summed up in the box and big letters, no slight agaainst yourself as the article has the bits I expect to be here. cygnis insignis 14:33, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

Wording of lede
I prefer this drafting of the lede wording:

The near-destruction of the Aboriginal Tasmanians and the frequent incidence of mass killings has been described by contemporary historians as an act of genocide. The description of the conflict as a genocide has at times been contested by some historians especially in the 20th century. The debates surrounding the Black War have been described as "a microcosm of the wider debate about the impact of settler colonialism on indigenous peoples".

Another editor has reverted it to what it reads now.

Could we please discuss and obtain consensus as to what wording is preferred?

My concern is that the current wording overstates the level of "debate"; when actually a consensus amongst most reliable sources is that this is subject an actual example of genocide, and no longer a matter of debate. Thanks. Jack4576 (talk) 02:55, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

Jack4576 (talk) 02:55, 23 April 2024 (UTC)


 * The existing wording is an accurate summary of the article and is much more concise. Quite a few experts in the field describe it as a genocide, quite a few do not. Those arguing that the Black War wasn't a genocide aren't just a fringe view, so no consensus. The statement "The debates surrounding the Black War have been described as 'a microcosm of the wider debate about the impact of settler colonialism on indigenous peoples'" doesn't appear in the article, isn't a summary of the article and is a classic case of weasel words. The lead is supposed to be an accurate summary of the article as it stands. WP:LEAD. If you want to add a secion on the Black War in the histiography of Settler Colonialism and then summarise it in the lead, be my guest. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 03:07, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Anyone else able to add a third opinion? Jack4576 (talk) 03:51, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * The words "a microcosm of the wider debate about the impact of settler colonialism on indigenous peoples" are a direct quote from a reliable source. Lead sections can be constructed from sources. Jack4576 (talk) 03:55, 23 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Reply I think your arguement is pretty thin. Jack's version seems to better summarize the article per WP:LEDE, avoids WP:FALSEBALANCE, and is well written.
 * Jack's statement, ...concern is that the current wording overstates the level of "debate", this is a valid concern and I think it correctly identifies a problem in the article.
 * Those arguing that the Black War wasn't a genocide aren't just a fringe view, so no consensus. Jack's version never asserted unanimity or that alternate views are fringe. The discussion has two sides which Jack’s version acknowledges. Consensus is a general agreement, not unanimity or the absence of other views, fringe or mainstream. Giving equal weight to all views regardless of their weight in reliable sources is WP:FALSEBALANCE.
 * “Quite a few experts in the field describe it as a genocide, quite a few do not. I think this implies that there is equal weight among reliable sources, when the weight from sources heavily leans to viewing the subject as genocide (see the appropriate section in the article for references). The current version of the lede implies greater weight to the “no genocide” view than the sources in the article reflect. WP:FALSEBALANCE
 * “"The debates surrounding the Black War have been described as 'a microcosm of the wider debate about the impact of settler colonialism on indigenous peoples'" doesn't appear in the article, isn't a summary of the article. The lede summarize the article, and this summarizes the genocide section.
 * and is a classic case of weasel words.”. Jack's version does not contain any weasel words, it is well written, the quote is very appropriate for the lede, and accurately describes the state of scholarship.
 *  // Timothy :: talk  04:30, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your contribution, Timothy. In the interest of obtaining a robust consensus, I'll allow some more time for other editors to contribute their thoughts if they so wish.
 * If after a few days there are no further comments, I'll restore my previous draft as reflecting a newly found consensus in this thread. Jack4576 (talk) 04:35, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Actually I've changed my mind. I'll restore it now. We can revert if there are further objections disrupting the consensus that has been reached here and now. Jack4576 (talk) 04:41, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * There is no consensus. Two people relying, with different points of view, within a couple of hoursof your posting does not constitute a consensus. I suggest you wait a few days and give other people a chance to comment. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 04:45, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * It does indeed constitute an interim consensus. Jack4576 (talk) 04:54, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * I side with @Aemilius Adolphin and believe a more concise lead is appropriate. The rest of the information in the current version, while potentially informative doesn't add much to the lead and does feel editorialized- while acknowledging the debate exists is sufficient to inform the reader. Lostsandwich (talk) 05:01, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * You address none of the concerns raised and affirmed by Timothy Jack4576 (talk) 05:13, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * 1) The current version of the lead simply states that there a debate on the issue, which is an accurate summary of the article. It does not state or imply that there is a majority on either side.
 * 2) The proposed revision states, "The near-destruction of the Aboriginal Tasmanians and the frequent incidence of mass killings has been described by contemporary historians as an act of genocide." It cites 2 sources. One is Clements who in fact argues that the Black War was NOT a genocide. The other is Lyndall Ryan which calls the dispute "a debate" thus supporting my view that we have an ongoing debate on our hands.
 * 3) The statement, "The description of the conflict as a genocide has at times been contested by some historians especially in the 20th century" is plain wrong. All the cited reliable sources arguing that the conflict was not a genocide are from the 21st century.
 * 4) The statement that the Black war "has been described by contemporary historians as an act of genocide" is meaningless. It is just as correct to say, "has been described as not a genocide by contemporary historians." There are historians and informed commentators on both sides of the debate.
 * 5) "The debates surrounding the Black War have been described as 'a microcosm of the wider debate about the impact of settler colonialism on indigenous peoples'" How is this a summary of the genocide section? Nowhere in that section does it say that the Black War is a microcosm of the settler colonialism debate. It is weasel words because the author of this opinion isn't identified and there is no evidence in the article that it represents a consensus view. It is also dubious on the face of it because the debate over the Black Wars is about the specific details of that conflict which are obviously different from all the other unique examples of settler colonialism. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 05:31, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * This is a false consensus. The overwhelming majority of contemporary respected scholars in this field acknowledge and describe the Black Wars as an example of genocide. Indeed, Raphael Lemkin regarded the war against Indigenous Tasmanians as a definitive example of what he meant by the term genocide.
 * I think we need more editors to weigh in here. It seems this attempt to reach consensus is deadlocked. Jack4576 (talk) 05:44, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * If it is indeed the "overwhelming majority of contemporary respected scholars in this field" who acknowledge that, then the (reverted) edit would still be in error. You're arguing something entirely different from the reasons for the revision. As it stands, the (reverted) edit was done so because it was wordy and didn't improve the lead, not because it was or wasn't the consensus of the "overwhelming majority of contemporary respected scholars". Lostsandwich (talk) 06:50, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

"is a term"
This edit changes the lede from:

to:

but the use of "is a term" is apparently contrary to WP:ISATERMFOR and WP:REFERS (independently of the use of the word "genocide"). Is the article about the war/conflict or about the term? I'm tempted to revert that change but I don't want to get tangled up in the current EW, nor muddy the waters of the. Mitch Ames (talk) 03:23, 24 May 2024 (UTC)

Wording of lead revisited
In relation to genocide, the the stable version of the lead states: "The near-destruction of the Aboriginal Tasmanians and the frequent incidence of mass killings have sparked debate among historians over whether the Black War should be defined as an act of genocide by the British colonists."

Although there is an ongoing discussion on the wording of the lead (above), a couple of editors have sought to change this without discussion to: "Scholars classify the event as an instance of settler colonialism and an instance of genocide against Indigenous peoples. The author of the concept of genocide, Raphael Lemkin, considered Tasmania the site of one of the world's clear cases of genocide and Hughes has described the loss of Aboriginal Tasmanians as "the only true genocide in English colonial history".

The problem with this change is that it presents only one side of an ongoing debate among scholars on the issue. The two editors also removed the following sentence from the section of the article on the genocide controversy: "However, other historians including Henry Reynolds, Richard Broome, and Nicholas Clements do not agree with the genocide thesis, arguing that the colonial authorities did not intend to destroy the Aboriginal population in whole or in part. "

Under policy, articles should be written from a neutral point of view and seriously contested assertions should not be stated as facts. Reynolds, Broome and Clements are leading scholars on the Black Wars and their research indicates that there is a serious debate on the question of genocide. Other scholars such as Josephine Flood also question the genocide thesis. There is no reason under policy to remove the statement that these scholars contest the genocide thesis and then to alter the lead in a way that suggests that all scholars agree with the genocide theory. I believe the stable version of the lead is an accurate summary of the relevant part of the article, is written from a NPOV, and should remain until a clear consensus based on policy is reached on alternative wording. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 13:44, 23 May 2024 (UTC)


 * A consensus of editors are of the view that the term genocide is more appropriate. Please stop reverting and edit warring. Jack4576 (talk) 14:38, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
 * There is no consensus on the Talk page here at all. Nor is the issue whether the word "genocide" is appropriate. The issue is WP:NPOV and I object to your changes on these grounds. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 21:35, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
 * You're wrong. In any case, I've opened an RfC to resolve the edit war you've been pursuing. Jack4576 (talk) 03:19, 24 May 2024 (UTC)


 * "frequent incidence" is not grammatically correct. The use of "frequent" implies the use of the plural "incidents" rather than the mass noun "incidence" - so I changed it. Alternatively, "frequent mass killings" or "frequency of mass killings" would work. My change is purely for grammatical reasons; it is not intended as an opinion on the current edit war (eg ). Mitch Ames (talk) 01:23, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * My aforementioned change was reverted by without an explicit reason, but I'm assuming as part of the bigger current edit-war, given that the reversion was followed by . I still assert that "frequent incidence" is grammatically incorrect, but I'll wait until the dust settles on the  before raising the matter again (if that phrase is retained). Mitch Ames (talk) 07:19, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I am not edit warring, I am enforcing consensus. Two editors including myself have expressed a view that ‘weasel words’ should be omitted from the lede, along with the false balance. Only one editor is insisting on the other position. Their repeated reversions are in defiance of consensus and they are the only one who is edit warring. Jack4576 (talk) 08:16, 24 May 2024 (UTC)

Proposed new wording for Lead
Hello all,

In the course of the closed RfC above, a few editors suggested that the lead should be expanded to provide more background. I propose the following version for discussion.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 07:22, 28 May 2024 (UTC)


 * I oppose this wording because it misleads the reader into thinking there is a contemporary debate as to whether this incident was an act of genocide. That proposition is unsupported by any sources, and breaches Wikipedia guidelines regarding false balance and weasel words. Jack4576 (talk) 00:39, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Well, it's still my preferred option and you are free to vote against it in a new RfC. But I have added the following compromise wording in the lead until the issue is resolved. "The near-destruction of the Aboriginal Tasmanians and the frequent incidence of mass killings is regarded by many contemporary historians as an act of genocide by the colonists. Others, however, argue that the colonial authorities did not intend to destroy the Aboriginal people." Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 01:36, 29 May 2024 (UTC)

Historiography
Hello all

I think the recent change to this section by User:Jack4576 is a big improvement, although I prefer the subheading to be "Academic discussion of genocide" rather than "Academic discussion of the genocide." The article makes it clear that there is a continuing academic debate on the issue and my wording presents this in a more neutral POV. I suppose the issue is whether we should use the Wikipedia voice WP:voice in this case to declare that there was a genocide. My view is that it is best to use more neutral wording when scholarly debate is ongoing. This isn't like the Holocaust and the Armenian Genocide where there are almost no distinguished experts in the field who question genocide. The views of Lyndall Ryan and Boyce are also a bit more nuanced than is presented in the article and there are more serious scholars who question, or at least partially question, the genocide thesis than the article suggests. I will have a closer look at the wording over the next few days. Given that the issue of wikipedia voice is also relevant to the lead, I would be interested in what other editors think. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 07:44, 28 May 2024 (UTC)


 * There are no contemporary scholars in this field, of repute, that contest that the Black War was a genocide. It is simpler and more true to the sources to refer to it as ‘the genocide’ Jack4576 (talk) 09:31, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Henry Reynolds, Richard Broome, Josephine Flood and Nicholas Clements are among the most distinguished experts on Aboriginal history and the Black War in Australia. I particularly recommend that you read Reynold's book, An Indelible Stain? Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:05, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
 * They don’t contest that the black war was a genocide. They have stated that it depends on what one’s definition of genocide; but that on many common definitions, the black war was most certainly a genocide. Jack4576 (talk) 00:41, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I have restored some of the material that was recently deleted. I have summarised it and added some new content with reliable sources. I have separated the critique of Windschuttle's views from the debate on the role of introduced diseases in Aboriginal depopulation.
 * Happy to discuss Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 04:25, 30 May 2024 (UTC)

Background section
Hello all

I have removed the "Background" section as it repeated information found elsewhere in the article. I moved the content to the relevant sections of the article and combined it with the existing content. I have replaced unsourced editorial comment with reliably sourced information. I have created a new sub-heading on Military Tactics. I have moved some information to the lead as a summary of the article.

Happy to discuss Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 05:47, 31 May 2024 (UTC)

Temporary lead
Hello all

As suggested by several editors in the RfC discussion, I have added some information to the lead to better summarise the article. I have left the contentious paragraph on the genocide issue as I found it following the recent edit by KlayCax. I did however slightly change the wording to remove a concern raised by Mitch Ames.

Happy to discuss Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 05:58, 31 May 2024 (UTC)


 * —. OK, thanks.
 * I think "traditional lands" should be changed to just "land". At the time, it was not "traditional land"; it was the land they lived on and occupied. Saying "traditional land" seems to imply that the situation then was as it is today - land that they "own" in the past (relative to 1803/1820s) but did not at the time (1820s). I don't think the word "traditional" adds any value here, but it does impose an unnecessary POV on the sentence. Mitch Ames (talk) 09:09, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Done. Please note I prefer "traditional lands" as it evokes at least 35 thousand years of tradition in those parts. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 09:25, 31 May 2024 (UTC)

RfC use of the word Genocide
NOTE: THIS RFC HAS BEEN REWORDED.

OLD RFC Question: There is an ongoing editorial dispute on this page as to the use of the word 'Genocide' in the article's lede.

Should the word 'Genocide' be used in the lede of this article?

NEW RFC Question: There is an ongoing editorial dispute as to the wording of the article's lede.

Which of the following drafts for the lede is preferred?

A: The Black War was the genocide of Aboriginal Tasmanians in Tasmania by British colonists from the mid-1820s to 1832.

British settlement spread rapidly over the traditional lands of the Aboriginal people. The conflict was fought largely as a guerrilla war by both sides; some 600 to 900 Aboriginal people and more than 200 British colonists died. Scholars classify the event as an instance of settler colonialism and an instance of genocide against Indigenous peoples. The author of the concept of genocide, Raphael Lemkin, considered Tasmania the site of one of the world's clear cases of genocide and Hughes has described the loss of Aboriginal Tasmanians as "the only true genocide in English colonial history".

B: The Black War was a period of violent conflict between British colonists and Aboriginal Tasmanians in Tasmania from the mid-1820s to 1832, as British settlement spread rapidly over the traditional Aboriginal lands.

The conflict was fought largely as a guerrilla war by both sides; some 600 to 900 Aboriginal people and more than 200 British colonists died. The event has been retrospectively described as an act of genocide by the British colonists.

C: The Black War was a period of violent conflict between British colonists and Aboriginal Tasmanians in Tasmania from the mid-1820s to 1832, as British settlement spread rapidly over the traditional Aboriginal lands.

The conflict was fought largely as a guerrilla war by both sides; some 600 to 900 Aboriginal people and more than 200 British colonists died. The near-destruction of the Aboriginal Tasmanians and the frequent incidence of mass killings have sparked debate among historians over whether the Black War should be defined as an act of genocide by the British colonists.

D: The Black War is a term used to refer to the violent conflict Aboriginal Tasmanians in Tasmania and British colonists from the mid-1820s to 1832. This conflict has been characterised retrospectively by many historians as a form of genocide.

British settlement spread rapidly over the traditional lands of the Aboriginal people. The conflict was fought largely as a guerrilla war by both sides; some 600 to 900 Aboriginal people and more than 200 British colonists died.

Scholars classify the event as an instance of settler colonialism and an instance of genocide against Indigenous peoples. The author of the concept of genocide, Raphael Lemkin, considered Tasmania the site of one of the world's clear cases of genocide and Hughes has described the loss of Aboriginal Tasmanians as "the only true genocide in English colonial history". Jack4576 (talk) 10:09, 24 May 2024 (UTC)


 * In my view the sources supporting an article on this subject mean that the use of the word 'genocide' is necessary to ensure a high-quality article on this topic. Jack4576 (talk) 02:36, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Comment The problem is that you have once again reverted to your preferred version of the article and have then opened a RfC which doesn't adress the issue at stake. The issue is not whether the word "genocide" should be used in the lead: the stable version already uses the word genocide. The issues are:
 * 1) You have changed the wording of the lead to give only one side of an ongoing debate. This violates policy on NPOV. WP:POV
 * 2) You have removed sourced content in the article which shows that eminent scholars of the Black Wars have questioned the genocide thesis. You gave no explanation for this. This violates policy on NPOV.
 * 3) You have changed neutrally worded section titles to titles which are misleading and support one side of a contested argument.
 * 4) You have then opened this vaguely worded RfC which will not resolve the core POV issues other editors have raised.
 * I think the best way to progress with this issue is that you:
 * 1) Revert to the stable version.
 * 2) Withdraw the current RfC
 * 3) Start a new RfC in which you clearly state all the changes to the stable version you wish to make. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 04:01, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * We already have a consensus against the ‘stable version’, because it contains weasel words. We have a consensus to remove those weasel words. We should not revert to that version. Jack4576 (talk) 08:18, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Comment (Summoned by bot) I don't think this RfC is properly stated. The second sentence of the lead invokes genocide and I don't see anyone here arguing that the word genocide should not be included in the lead., the lead ends with a copy-paste of something that appears later in the article: The author of the concept of genocide, Raphael Lemkin, considered Tasmania the site of one of the world's clear cases of genocide and Hughes has described the loss of Aboriginal Tasmanians as "the only true genocide in English colonial history." This seems like too much detail too early, invoking two scholars, one of whom only by last name, and invoking a from farther down the page. My instinct would be to remove this bit. As for the current overall conflict happening here, I don't have an answer. Not yet at least; it's a lot to read and think about. I think us all agreeing that the word genocide should be used is good news. At least we have consensus on that!  The Savage  Norwegian  05:27, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Comment - Restated Question - As TheSavageNorwegian says, this RfC is mis-stated. Supporting this RfC as proposed supports both (or now all three) versions of the lead and thus resolves nothing. As no-one has yet !voted, I would suggest that the RfC should consider the question and options as follows:
 * Which of these leads should the article have:
 * A - Status quo ante:
 * B:
 * C:
 * Please !vote with A, B or C. It may be that none of these are right (for instance elements of A and C could emerge). Please label new proposals with the next available letter, and only if they are a significant difference. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 07:22, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Comment on C: "is a term" - I still think "is a term" is problematic - see below. It might be helpful to change C to not use "is a term", or state explicitly that you are doing that deliberately and address the question of whether the article is about the war/conflict or about the term. Mitch Ames (talk) 07:40, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * As it is not actually my RfC, I wanted to state the options exactly as presented. For the avoidance of doubt, one could !vote for option C and specify "But restated with is a term used to refer to replaced with was". A closer will take that comment into account, I think. And yes, you are right that "is a term" is problematic. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 08:15, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * You should open a new RfC, instead of calling for a vote on an alternative question. Otherwise third parties won’t be notified properly. Jack4576 (talk) 08:20, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * In any event I support either B or C.
 * I vote against A. Jack4576 (talk) 08:27, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * If you wish, you may copy my restatement as 3 4 options into your statement at the front. This will transclude it appropriately. In any case, anyone finding the RfC on your statement will see the options on arrival. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 09:07, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * OK I'll do that. Jack4576 (talk) 10:05, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * D - Jack has added a fourth option into the article now.
 * Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 09:19, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Comment This is becoming very confusing and is likely to put off independent parties from commenting. May I suggest:
 * 1) As an interim measure we revert to this stable version.
 * 2) The main dispute seems to be between @Jack4576 and myself. If they wish, we can discuss the issue on my Talk page and see if we can come up with compromise wording. (I can live with Option D with some tweeks on wording.)
 * 3) If Jack4567 and I come up with agreed wording, we withdraw the RfC and change the lead to this wording.
 * 4) If any editor objects to this wording, we seek compromise on the Talk page.
 * 5) If that doesn't work we put forward a couple of clear proposals for change via a new RfC Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 09:59, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Three editors are opposed to reverting to the previous version; on the grounds that it contains weasel words.
 * There is a consensus that there should -not- be a reversion to that version. Jack4576 (talk) 10:04, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Seems sensible but Jack will need to withdraw the RfC, as the one who started it. Also I am avoiding reverting to the status quo ante bellum because I am waiting for Jack to do so. If Jack self reverts, there will be no 3RR breach. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 10:05, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * If you revert that, you are overriding a consensus that has been reached by three other editors that weasel words should be excluded from the lede.
 * Stop overriding that consensus, and wait for the RfC to resolve. Jack4576 (talk) 10:10, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * There is no such consensus. That is why there is an RfC. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 10:12, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Nonsense. There is a consensus. Three editors object to the weasel words in the lede. This RfC was created to bring some finality, and resolve the obstinacy of a single editor that refuses to follow that consensus. Jack4576 (talk) 10:18, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Disagree with your count, as I stated on your talk page. But as said editor is offering to workshop your option D, I think that would be the quickest way to resolve this. You could withdraw the RfC and start a new one if you find you cannot agree. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 10:30, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * That editor has proven themselves unwilling to compromise and difficult to work with. It will be more efficient to resolve this through RfC. Jack4576 (talk) 10:40, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * — Agreed. In particular I note that the four options, currently nicely formatted and easily readable under "Comment - Restated Question" have been re-ordered when presented (unformatted, harder to read) as "NEW RFC Question". If an editor !votes just by letter, eg "option A", there would be serious doubt as to "option A" they were referring to.I suggest that  of which version the article is "reverted" to, this RFC should be withdrawn and re-created with a consistent and stable set of options to chose from. Mitch Ames (talk) 12:29, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Comment I don't think B or C work right now because of their centering specific scholars in the lead, and the criticism of that specific wording that I outlined above. Striking the last sentence of B or C makes them much better. I also don't like the ambiguous wording of "by the British colonists". The first three or so times I read it I'm wondering why it matters that it was described by British colonists. But no, it means the genocide was by British colonists. Another small issue I have is the term "spread rapidly". Seems like an opinion, given that it happened over 12 years. That's rapid in some, but not all contexts. Happy to be wrong about that; perhaps it is unambiguously rapid. Sorry for only having a comment again, it's hard to choose a favorite wording when I find problems with all of them. I think B is probably my favorite provided you drop the last sentence.  The Savage  Norwegian  16:45, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * D, as it's the most in-depth discussion of the application of the term "genocide", but with the first paragraph of B/C, as D's second sentence is redundant. I'd also suggest removing the first sentence of the second paragraph and adding the second sentence to the first paragraph. So;
 * The Black War was a period of violent conflict between British colonists and Aboriginal Tasmanians in Tasmania from the mid-1820s to 1832, as British settlement spread rapidly over the traditional Aboriginal lands. The conflict was fought largely as a guerrilla war by both sides; some 600 to 900 Aboriginal people and more than 200 British colonists died.
 * Scholars classify the event as an instance of settler colonialism and an instance of genocide against Indigenous peoples. The author of the concept of genocide, Raphael Lemkin, considered Tasmania the site of one of the world's clear cases of genocide and Hughes has described the loss of Aboriginal Tasmanians as "the only true genocide in English colonial history".
 * It might be a good idea to add another paragraph on the effects of the conflict, as the page is fairly long. According to the prosesize gadget, the page is over 6700 words long, and MOS:LEADLENGTH says the lead should be three or four paragraphs long accordingly. Ships  &amp;  Space (Edits) 16:34, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Agree that the aftermath should have a summary in the lead. Someone should just do it; I'd say it's well outside the scope of this discussion.  The Savage  Norwegian  16:52, 24 May 2024 (UTC)

The Black War was a period of violent conflict between British colonists and Aboriginal Tasmanians in Tasmania from the mid-1820s to 1832, as British settlement spread rapidly over the traditional Aboriginal lands. The conflict was fought largely as a guerrilla war by both sides; some 600 to 900 Aboriginal people and more than 200 British colonists died. The near-destruction of the Aboriginal Tasmanians and the frequent incidence of mass killings have sparked debate among historians over whether the Black War should be defined as an act of genocide by the British colonists.Lukewarmbeer (talk) 09:14, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Request procedural close - I tried to salvage it, but as pointed out by Mitch Ames, the copying of options to the the front statement has changed the order of the options I suggested. and I now cannot tell if the !votes above refer to my odering or to the copied up ordering. Jack wishes to persist, but this is now a trainwreck. It needs to be closed, with no prejudice to immediately re-opening a clearly stated and neutral RfC. If re-opened, Ships Space's suggestion could be included as an option as the points are good. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 17:08, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I don’t think it’s unclear what people’s positions are when the comments are read alongside the votes Jack4576 (talk) 01:50, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
 * You are not the one who would have to close this in a month with potentially 30 or so !votes all of which would have to be clearly discernible. I don't know why you changed the order (except perhaps so as not to list the status quo first?), but because you did, it is now a train wreck. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 06:43, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I’m sure the closing admin will be able to figure it out but thanks for expressing your concern Jack4576 (talk) 15:35, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Procedural close without prejudice because of the reordering of options. I suggest creating a list of options and stabilising that list  creating a new RFC so that the RFC participants are not commenting/!voting on a list that is changing. (Please consider  when making that list.) Mitch Ames (talk) 06:51, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I agree with this proposal and I will draft an option for the lead.
 * @Jack4576 Will you please stop altering the contentious parts of the lead to your preferred wording while the issue is still under discussion? I am still happy to discuss the wording on my talk page to see if we can come up with a compromise which might avoid the need for a new RfC. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 07:50, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
 * No. There is a consensus that the weasel words and false balance issues need to be removed. That consensus will be enforced even while this discussion about what should be the final wording, is ongoing. Jack4576 (talk) 15:32, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Once again, you have attempted to impose your preferred wording. I object to this because there is a clear consensus that the stable version should remain until the issue is resolved through an RfC or compromise wording gained through consensus. Please revert your last change and continue the discussion on the Talk pages. If this is the wording you wish to submit to a RfC then please state so here on the Talk page and give other editors time to come up with alternative options. Or you can drop into my Talk page as see if we can come up with compromise wording that is more likely to gain a consensus and avoid a RfC altogether. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 05:10, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Nonsense. The stable version prior to the RfC resolving should be the one that complies with editorial guidelines. We have clear guidelines against false balance and weasel words, and those guidelines should be followed especially in cases where there are no sources to support a very problematic phrasing. There is no contemporary ‘debate’ that a genocide occurred, and no sources support the sentence that such a debate has been ‘sparked’. Instead, the sources show that historians have concluded this was an act of genocide.
 * Pending the outcome of the RfC, the guidelines should be followed in the interim. and, additionally, there is clearly not a consensus that the prior wording is preferred. Jack4576 (talk) 06:34, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
 * The stable version is an accurate summary of the article as it stands. The discussion on the lead shows it has the support of Lostsadnwich, Lukewarmbeer and me. Sirfurboy has also stated that this version should be retained until a RfC is concluded or a consensus for another verion otherwise obtained. There is no consensus for your version. Please revert it. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 07:07, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
 * There are more than three other editors (myself, TheSavageNorwegian, Ships & Space, and TimothyBlue) that support a drafting that excludes the weasel words.
 * Four people is more than three. We have a consensus that the weasel words must be removed, even prior to the resolution of this RfC. You must stop edit warring and ignoring this consensus. That goes for you too @Sirfurboy Jack4576 (talk) 03:36, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Please stop with this. No one but you has asserted that change. Please stop edit warring and wait for the RfC process. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 04:19, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
 * A clear majority of editors are opposed to the prior wording with false balance. Following consensus -requires- that those words be removed, -now-.
 * This RfC is merely to determine what the alternative drafting should be. However, in the meantime, we must remove the sentence with false balance about genocide in the lead.
 * You and Aemilius are the only editors engaged in an edit war; because you are refusing to follow that clear consensus that the false balance must be removed. Jack4576 (talk) 05:51, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
 * C And to avoid doubt as to which 'C'....


 * There is no ‘sparked debate’, there is no debate, and there are no sources to support that statement. There is an academic consensus that a genocide occurred, and this is reflected in the sources. Jack4576 (talk) 15:34, 26 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Comment- Jack4576 has been blocked for edit warring, and this RfC is a mess. I would close it, but we have !votes and comments on the options., , , would you object to a close that reads something like "Procedural close: nominator blocked. No prejudice against creation of a new RfC on the issue"? I also note that there is now a reformulated lead that seemed to be agreeable to both Jack and Aemelius Dolphin, but is not currently an option in this RfC. It might best just to leave it like that. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 20:01, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Absolutely not. I may not participate in a new RfC, though, as I'm going on vacation in a few days and I won't have my computer with me. Ships  &amp;  Space (Edits) 22:06, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I'm happy for a close on those terms thanks. Lukewarmbeer (talk) 06:06, 31 May 2024 (UTC)

Early conflict
Hello all

As this is a background section to the main conflict of 1824-31, I have rewritten it in summary style, with links to relevant main articles for more detail. I have summarised the content on the expansion of the settlement and clarified its link to the outbreak of war. I have replaced unsourced content with reliable sourced content. I have summarised and clarified Clements' view on the motivations for settler violence. I have tried to consistently use "colonists" for all the British and "settlers" for the free settlers, and "British" (not "English" or "European") for the colonists (except when it is a quotation or the context dictated otherwise). I have tried to consistently use "Aboriginal people" or "Aboriginal Tasmanians" to describe the Indigenous population unless when quoting directly. There are some minor wording changes to reduce some very close paraphrasing of sources.

Happy to discuss, particularly if you think I have removed/changed any content which should be reinstated. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 03:02, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Crisis Years
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I have replaced unsourced content with reliable sourced content and have rewritten some very close paraphrasing of sources. I have corrected some errors and reduced the reliance on one source (Ryan 2012) by adding more content from Boyce, Clements and the University of Newcastle Frontier Massacres website. I have rewritten the section in summary style. I have cut some repeated information and have reduced excessive quotations in accordance with policy: MOS:QUOTE WP:DON'T PRESERVE

Happy to discuss, particularly if you think I have removed/changed any content which should be reinstated. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 05:38, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

Martial law
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I have rewritten some very close paraphrasing of Ryan (2012). I have added content from other reliable sources and have added Johnson and McFarlane (2015) to the references. I have rewritten the section in summary style and have cut some repeated information.

Happy to discuss, particularly if you think I have removed/changed any content which should be reinstated. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 04:37, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

Aborigines Committee
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I have rewritten this is summary style with more concise wording. I have added some reliably sourced content and have moved some content from other sections to this section.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 05:22, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

North West conflict
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I have added some sourced content to this section. I have reworded some parts for accuracy and clarity and to reduce some close paraphrasing of sources. I have made it clearer that the North nation was a separate group. The conflict with the Pallittore clan of the North nation is covered elsewhere in this article.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 05:37, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I don't think "north west" or "north" are proper nouns here, so ought not be capitalised. Also, we should be consistent on whether "north-west" is hyphenated or not. Mitch Ames (talk) 06:08, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Jones and Ryan give the North nation and North West nation as proper nouns for Aboriginal nations (although obviously that's not what they called themselves in their own languages.) Other sources just say, "the Aborignal clans of the north-west" or "the Aboriginal bands of the north" etc. There is no consitent terminology. I was always taught to hyphenate north-west when used as an adjective, but the sources are inconsistent on this. I have tried to rewrite the section touse north west as adjectives rather than proper nouns. I am happy to hyphenate this or not. I will have to check the whole article though to see if this is consistent. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 06:49, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I have eventually gone with hyphenated compass points unless it is a proper noun which is unhyphenated in the sources. Sorry for the confusion. Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 08:01, 15 June 2024 (UTC)