Talk:Black and Blue (Better Call Saul)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 07:07, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

Some of the same issues as other episodes and some light copyediting but almost there. Again, pinging. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:07, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ A person in Georgia (talk) 21:31, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * about 80% of the boxing sequence should be "80 percent" per MOS:PERCENT
 * Bernstein had been concerned that Odenkirk's training from his action film Nobody would impact his performance but Odenkirk was able to hold back. you want a comma after performance here, as "Odenkirk was able to hold back" is indeed a sentence of its own.
 * Albuquerque's former world champion boxer Johnny Tapia the possessive here strikes me as odd
 * "doing what every character in 'Black and Blue' is being forced to do: confront their own worst tendencies head-on." another case of MOS:INOROUT fixing

Sourcing and spot checks
Earwig checks out, though I wonder if there's just a tad too much of Greene. I won't ding you for it.


 * 3: Used five times, but checks out each time. ✅
 * 6: I can't check this one out... Is there a timestamp for that video?
 * 10: Quotes are reproduced faithfully. ✅
 * 15: Emmy nomination. ✅

Other items

 * No image issues.