Talk:Blackburn Buccaneer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 08:23, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:23, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * Link carrier, interdictor in lede
 * Modified as requested Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Specify that the Sverdlov's were light cruisers
 * Modified as requested Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Check for redundant links within the same section
 * Will survey as best I can, please let me know if there is a specific area believed to be troublesome in this regard Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Mention that BLC was also used for the horizontal stabilizer and amend the caption in that section accordingly
 * Modified as requested Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Link tailplane, AN-12
 * Modified as requested, all mentions of AN-12 removed. Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Many of your captions should not have periods (full stops) as they're not complete sentences. See MOS:CAPTION
 * Modified as requested Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Be consistent about using the HMS prefix.
 * have made some changes in line with this request; I didn't want to link every mention though; is the consistency for non-linked mentions now consistent enough? Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * only 1 aircraft got an aircraft kill through the whole service. The kill was in the Gulf War against a taxiing AN-12 with bombs. The first part is awkward, and I suggest that you merge the second sentence into the first. The kill tally is contradicted later. Which is correct?
 * Have removed this content entirely, largely due to this contradiction - my apologies for not catching it. Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Explain a little bit more about the spar rings, like location and maybe change the link to aircraft spar. Suggest adding a bit more about the wing spars in the structure section, with links and an explanation how it had to go around the engines
 * Modified but will work on more Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Explain that 216 Sqdn had barely received its aircraft before it was disbanded in the main body
 * Modified as requested Kyteto (talk) 18:22, 25 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Nicely done--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:27, 23 June 2023 (UTC)