Talk:Blackguard Children

=Suggestions for improvement=

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Hello  I came here to offer you some piece of advice as well! I really love the structure and clarity of the language used in general, I noticed a little passage that could be improved in terms of a more neutral tone though in the Background section "London stood out among other European cities for its beauty and maintenance, but it nonetheless...". Besides that, other points I would consider interesting to find while reading your article could be short summaries or citations concerning your topic from the works you cited in your lead section, Colonel Jack and Oliver Twist, and in the Legacy section, around the figure od Thomas Coram and, in general, the actions taken at that time to improve the condition of orphans and poor people. Here's a link you may find useful for further reading suggestions []. Thank you again for your help, I hope you may find something useful in my contribution as well. Pbord (talk) 16:12, 15 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Hi there! Thank you for your suggestions! As to the first point, it was supposed to be supported by the note #4, but I realise now that it might be unclear, so I'll try to fix this as soon as possible! I have been adding a couple of paragraphs since you wrote in here, and I hope I'll be able to provide them with quotes soon enough.. And yes, I had found that page, the problem is that I find it to be a little too vague, because literature overflows with novels whose protagonists are orphans, but this does not necessarily make thieves out of them.. Thank you so much, I will try to improve every section you have highlighted! Asile91 (talk) 23:38, 15 November 2015 (UTC)

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