Talk:Blackout (drug-related amnesia)

following the typical curve of wiki articles, getting more and more obtuse, less valuable to anyone other than authors
Wiki articles start off small, get fatter in the middle, and then die of gravitational collapse.

Editors! Every little dropping you add does not make the article better! Consider that editing and removing crapola, simplifying article for peons may actually have more added value than whatever you are discussing in your phd pomo foucault chemistry deconstructionist critical thinking camp.

This article is becoming bloated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.53.116.168 (talk) 23:11, February 11, 2015‎

Better lead and Pictures
I think in addition to taking out fluff within the article to make it more concise, there should be a focus on improving the lead. It should cover more of what is talked about in the article. Also there should be pictures added in to illustrate different examples within the article. Zyskes (talk) 18:16, 26 January 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zyskes (talk • contribs) 00:16, 21 January 2021 (UTC)