Talk:Bladder cancer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tom (LT) (talk · contribs) 23:37, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Wow, what an article @, certainly looks good at first glance. Thanks for your edits to this article to bring it to this point. I've reviewed a number of medical and non medical articles and will be reviewing this article. I will review against the 6 good article criteria. On first glance I highly doubt there will be any major problems, this article looks appropriately cited, imaged, and comprehensive. I will spend a few days reading the article and then post a review. --Tom (LT) (talk) 23:37, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Hey @ thank you for reviewing this article, I have started to work on your comments. --Astroketh (talk) 01:42, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Hey @. I've just closed the review, but seeing as you've become more active I'm happy to reopen it and complete this review if there is some editing on your part. Cheers --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:42, 28 May 2020 (UTC).

Hi @ yes that would be helpful. I have started to work on your comments.--Astroketh (talk) 06:50, 31 May 2020 (UTC)


 * --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:09, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Stopping mid diagnosis section today.--Tom (LT) (talk) 22:50, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

Commentary

 * Readability
 * "Higher levels of N-nitroso compounds(nitrate) " - not sure what (nitrate) means or if it really adds anything to the article... suggest remove it?
 * Removed --Astroketh (talk) 01:38, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Aristolochic acid activates peroxidase in the urothelium and causes transversion mutation in the TP53 Tumor suppressor Gene. " - tumour suppressor gene shouldn't be in caps.
 * Changed as suggested--Astroketh (talk) 06:50, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Sometimes the word "specially" is used when I think "especially" is intended
 * Diagnosis
 * Diagnosis - "urine cytology... There are newer non-invasive urine ". Suggest move the newer noninvasive urine tests to the end of the diagnosis section and split a separate paragraph, as the paragraph concludes with the fact these aren't to be used at present, so they are less important than the information about biopsies etc beneath them.
 * Changed as suggested--Astroketh (talk) 06:50, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Diagnoss - "cancer is detected on TURBT, an MRI and/or CT scan (abdomen and pelvis or urogram) " suggest link MRI, and also reword "and/or CT scan" to "a CT scan of the abdomen and pelvis"
 * Changed as suggested--Astroketh (talk) 06:50, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Diagnosis - "to look for metastasis" suggest explain metastasis, so that a lay reader can understand this concept.
 * Changed as suggested--Astroketh (talk) 00:45, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Diagnosis - "Histologically, papillary transitional cell carcinoma can present in its typical form or with divergent differentiation (squamous, glandular differentiation or micropapillary variant). " will need to be simplified - eg "Under the microscope," instead of histology, and "in its different forms" or instead of "divergent differentiation"
 * Changed to read easier--Astroketh (talk) 00:45, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I suggest the tables "Divergent histologies of non-papillary transitional cell carcinoma are listed below.", staging, grading, and the risk of recurrence, which are relevant to the article but quite long, be collapsed by default (see for example, Lymphoma). As it is, I think they are very long, bordering into WP:NOT territory and also unlikely to be of great use to most readers... but if they are included I think a collapsed table or a WP:FORK to an additional article may be preferable.
 * "Bladder cancer is staged (classified by the extent of spread of the cancer) and graded " - suggest link staging + grading
 * "WHO classification (2004/2016)[80][81] " - why is 2004 included?
 * 2016 is a extension of 2004, see section 1.3 --here--Astroketh (talk) 00:45, 4 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Images
 * I think captions could be improved in many images to provide either some context or a little more information. Most readers won't know what type of image or where things are.
 * "Transitional cell carcinoma of the bladder. The white in the bladder is contrast." could explain that the image is a CT scan in the pelvis, that the cancer is the blackened mass in the contrast.
 * "Location of bladder cancer" could explain that the bladder is an organ in the pelvis and the image shows the location of the cancer as in the lining of the bladder wall.
 * "Bladder wall thickening due to cancer" again, mentioning that this is a CT scan
 * "Bladder tumor in FDG PET due to the high physiological FDG-concentration in the bladder, furosemide was supplied together with 200 MBq FDG. The uptake cranial to the lesion is a physiological uptake in the colon." definitely needs to be simplied for the reader. I don't think the fact that furosemide or the FDG dose that was given is that important to this article.
 * Some images need a bit more explanation
 * "Diagram showing the T stages of bladder cancer"
 * "Stage N1 bladder cancer" - eg "N1 is defined as involvement of local lymph node groups, shown here"
 * "Advanced bladder cancer (M1b)"


 * Verifiability
 * Missing a citation:
 * "Blood in the urine may also be caused by other conditions, such as bladder or ureteric stones, infection, kidney disease, kidney cancers or vascular malformations, though these conditions (except kidney cancers) would typically be painful. "
 * "Aristolochic acid activates peroxidase in the urothelium and causes transversion mutation in the TP53 Tumor suppressor Gene. "
 * "Histologically, papillary transitional cell carcinoma can present in its typical form or with divergent differentiation (squamous, glandular differentiation or micropapillary variant). "
 * This table ("Divergent histologies of non-papillary transitional cell carcinoma are listed below.") lacks a citation for histology and prevalance.
 * "Staging usually follows the first transurethral resection of bladder tumor (TURBT). Papillary tumors confined to the mucosa or which invade the lamina propria are classified as Ta or T1. Flat lesion are classified as Tis. Both are grouped together as non-muscle invasive disease for therapeutic purposes. "


 * References
 * Citation number 1: "National Cancer Institute. 1 January 1980. Archived from the original on 14 July 2017. Retrieved 18 July 2017". Two issues. Firstly, it's from 1980?!! That can't be right. Secondly, I can't access the archive to verify it. There is enough information about bladder scan going round I think most citations should be from the last 5 - 10 years to ensure that they are still current
 * Changed as suggested--Astroketh (talk) 01:16, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Citation 11 is missing a retrieval date ("Survival statistics for bladder cancer - Canadian Cancer Society". www.cancer.ca.")
 * Not to be too picky but citation number 35: " Chaudhary KS, Lu QL, Abel PD, Khandan-Nia N, Shoma AM, el Baz M, et al. (January 1997). "Expression of bcl-2 and p53 oncoproteins in schistosomiasis-associated transitional and squamous cell carcinoma of urinary bladder". British Journal of Urology. 79 (1): 78–84."
 * Citation number 36: " Shokeir AA (January 2004). "Squamous cell carcinoma of the bladder: pathology, diagnosis and treatment". BJU International. 93 (2): 216–20. doi:10.1111/j.1464-410x.2004.04588.x. PMID 14690486."
 * #43 lacks retrieval date: "Online Mendelian Inheritance in Man (OMIM) 109800"
 * #44 also lacks last updated and retrieval date: " "Bladder cancer". Genetics Home Reference. "
 * #49 "Bladder Cancer Report" (PDF). World Cancer Research Fund : International. Retrieved 9 November 2019. lacks publication date
 * #53 ""EAU Guidelines: Non-muscle-invasive Bladder Cancer Diagnosis". Uroweb. Retrieved 12 November 201" lacks publication date
 * #54 " "EAU Guidelines: Muscle-invasive and Metastatic Bladder Cancer diagnosis". Uroweb. Retrieved 12 November 2019. " lacks publication date
 * #55 " Lotan Y, Roehrborn CG (January 2003). "Sensitivity and specificity of commonly available bladder tumor markers versus cytology: results of a comprehensive literature review and meta-analyses". Urology. 61 (1): 109–18, discussion 118. doi:10.1016/S0090-4295(02)02136-2. PMID 12559279. " now 17 years old
 * #63 " "Uroweb - European Association of Urology (EAU)". Uroweb. Retrieved 7 November 2019. " lacks publication date
 * #64 " "Types of Bladder Cancer: TCC & Other Variants | CTCA". CancerCenter.com. Retrieved 10 August 2018. " lacks a publication date
 * #71 "Urothelial Carcinoma Variants - American Urological Association". www.auanet.org" - no date or access time

Status query
Tom (LT), it doesn't appear that any action has been taken to address the issues, though bots coming through have made minor modifications to three of the references since your review. Nominator Astroketh has made only six edits in 2020: one in February, four on March 13, and the most recent on April 24, two days prior to the review being open. If Astroketh doesn't return in the next several days, probably the thing to do is to close the nomination as unsuccessful. They can always renominate once they've returned and worked on the issues you've noted above. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:12, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I did need a bit of a prompt to make a decision here. I have failed the review seeing as it's been open for a month with no change. I am failing this in two main domains:
 * readability; this article is too difficult for general readers in certain areas, and
 * verifiability, taking into account the need for references, appropriately recent for medical sources.
 * I can definitely see it passing in the future with some work, and thank the nominator and main editors for the efforts they've put in to date. --Tom (LT) (talk) 01:44, 25 May 2020 (UTC)