Talk:Blaster Master (video game)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments
This review will probably take me a week or two as real life is busier than I expected when I started, but here are a few minor issues to correct.


 * Alt text looks good
 * No disambigs
 * Refs look good
 * The first screenshot could do with a rationale update
 * "These functions include weapon upgrades as well as abilities to swim freely underwater, walk on walls and ceilings, and hover above the ground" -- shouldn't "walk" be "drive"? I thought you could only go up walls while in SOPHIA.
 * "They lose a life if their power meter runs out" could use the word "respective" to become "They lose a life if their respective power meters run out"
 * "They are given five continues which allow them to restart the game at the same level in which they have lost all their lives." --this sounds like Jason and SOPHIA. I would change it to "The player is given five continues...
 * The next sentence has a similar issue
 * I'm not a fan of the redlinks, but I don't think they necessarily need to be fixed. My opinion is if SwankWorld and Nintendo Life seem notable enough to make articles of them then they can be left.  If not I'd remove it.  The Blaster Master Boy redlink is arguably safe no matter what.
 * The GameFAQs and StrategyWiki external links don't add anything to the article. Please remove them.

More to come...

Reviewer: Teancum (talk) 15:21, 22 February 2010 (UTC)


 * I strengthened the fair-use rationale of File:Blaster master 01.png (see ) and made the other corrections you noted above . –MuZemike 16:31, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

PASS - I actually had some extra time this morning and went over the article two more times. Nice work! --Teancum (talk) 16:40, 22 February 2010 (UTC)