Talk:Bless Me Indeed (Jabez's Song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 00:59, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Please remove the "Chronology" parameter form the infobox; thanks
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Add the year 2000 in parentheses after the title of the book The Prayer of Jabez please
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

 * Again, please add the year 2000 in parentheses after the title of the book The Prayer of Jabez so it appears exactly as so: "The Prayer of Jabez (2000)"
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * No source for the sentence that describes where the song was recorded; please add one
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

 * Looks good! :D
 * Great!  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Reception and chart performance

 * If you wanted, I would even turn this into two separate sections
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

 * The 'm' in "Allmusic" needs to be capitalized
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Are there any other reviews available this section is quite small; perhaps some album reviews that include this track?
 * I worked extensively on the album this song is on, Almost There, and out of those I got the reviews mentioned here. I could only find one more review, from Amazon ( http://www.amazon.com/Almost-There-MercyMe/dp/B000062Y7I). Is that reliable or no?  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes! That one is reliable! Carbrera (talk) 19:21, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

 * Nothing to say here! :)

Credits and personnel

 * Remove the parentheses around "Credits from the album liner notes"; it's unnecessary
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Unlink "MercyMe", they are already linked several times in this article
 * done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Charts

 * Looks good

Other notes

 * Mainly, please take care of the copyright notice at the header of the article
 * Frankly not sure what to do with it. The copyright justification used on the song File:Bless Me Indeed.ogg is standard. There's nothing wrong with it - it's low-quality, less than 10% of the song, etc. The only reason it is tagged is I had a user come through and decide to tag several of my pages at good article for whatever reason . His justification here was "Incomplete non-free use rationale. Picky, but this is at GAC". Pretty sure I can't remove the notice myself.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Add an "External links" section that includes a MetroLyrics link to the official lyrics of the song
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * The category "Debut singles" could be added since this is technically MercyMe's debut single
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

End of GA Review:
A very short article, but with great depth and good use of resources. I will place on hold for seven days to allow the nominator to make any changes, good luck! Carbrera (talk) 01:08, 3 June 2016 (UTC)