Talk:Blindfold Me/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 02:59, 25 March 2018 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * "the album's second single" - I'd add what the first single was in the lead and the body
 * I do not think that it is necessary to put it in the lead and the body. If a reader is interested in reading about the other singles or more about the album, they can click on the link to the album. Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I think the quote by Garrett is a bit much. The first 3 sentences in particular ("Nas is probably one of the coolest cats I've ever met. He's just so laid back. He's a really cool guy so it was dope.") I'd tone it down a bit, probably to the point where it doesn't need to be within a quote box anymore.
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I think I can guess what a 'club burner' is (though not 100% sure), but what is a "rap joint" and what is "space-age hip hop"? Maybe I'm just not gangsta enough but I have don't know what this actually says about the song itself. Can you give any more specific descriptions of the song's composition and lyrics?
 * I have removed the quotes. Unfortunately, I believe that I have already exhausted all of the sources about the song in general, including the composition and lyrics. Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Should kink be wikilinked to Kink (sexual)?
 * Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * You need to say what publication Sal Cinquemani is writing in.
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * Credits and Personnel needs a source. Perhaps Allmusic?
 * Thank you for catching this. I can't believe that I forgot that. Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Can you find any coverage of the song being performed live?
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Looks pretty good. Placing on hold until issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 08:26, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. I believe that I have addressed everything. Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Happy to pass this now. Well done. Freikorp (talk) 08:47, 26 March 2018 (UTC)