Talk:Blitz-class aviso/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

Review:
 * "ships of any time": ships of any kind? - Dank (push to talk) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Yup. Wonder what I was thinking of when I wrote that. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * "While serving as a torpedo boat flotilla leader": I'd prefer "When serving as torpedo boat flotilla leaders" or "When leading torpedo boat flotillas"
 * Fixed.
 * "speed this": this speed
 * Apparently I'm dyslexic periodically.
 * "The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts. They also carried one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.": The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts and one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.
 * Done.
 * "In 1891–1892": I'm fighting a losing battle here, but I think some readers are going to wonder what this means, if not "In 1891 and 1892". - Dank (push to talk) 20:23, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Sounds fine to me.
 * Otherwise:
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * - Dank (push to talk) 21:56, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing the article, Dan. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * - Dank (push to talk) 21:56, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing the article, Dan. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing the article, Dan. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 23:40, 24 June 2013 (UTC)