Talk:Bloody Knife/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk · contribs) 20:28, 1 December 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * No disamb links
 * All external links check ok


 * The ISBN for Donovan, James (2008). A Terrible Glory: Custer and The Little Bighorn needs checking
 * I fixed the ISBN mistake. RG (talk) 20:45, 1 December 2011 (UTC)


 * More in line citations are required - the first sentence has two then the rest of the paragraph only has one at the end. There are several statements in the paragraph that should be cited.
 * Which statements are you refering to? Basically everything in the rest of that paragraph is in covered in that lone source at the end. RG (talk) 05:45, 7 December 2011 (UTC)


 * The same with the second paragraph, there are four citations two thirds of the way in and its not clear what cite is for what fact. I can add cn tags if that would help
 * Yes, the cn tags would be very helpful. RG (talk) 05:45, 7 December 2011 (UTC)


 * First paragraph of the First years as a scout section could use more in line citations
 * The cn tags might be useful here as well. RG (talk) 05:45, 7 December 2011 (UTC)


 * It needs a good copy edit can I suggest you post a request here WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors
 * I've sent in a request. RG (talk) 05:45, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

On hold
I will put the review on hold until after the copy edit. Jim Sweeney (talk) 17:28, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
 * It seems there is a large backlog for copy edits. I will fail the article for now and revisit once the copy edit is completed. Jim Sweeney (talk) 22:58, 21 December 2011 (UTC)