Talk:Bloody Mary (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GagaNutella (talk · contribs) 04:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)

After the request for WP:COPYEDITORS, this article is almost ready for GA. My review:


 * Wikilink Clinton Sparks in the infobox
 * Delete the space between the infobox and the lead
 * "Bloody Mary" is a song that was recorded by American singer Lady Gaga for her second studio album Born This Way (2011). → "Bloody Mary" is a song by American singer Lady Gaga recorded for her second studio album, Born This Way (2011).
 * Gaga, Fernando Garibay, and Paul "DJ White Shadow" Blair produced the song, which was produced by Gaga, Blair, Garibay, and Clinton Sparks. → Gaga, Fernando Garibay, and Paul "DJ White Shadow" Blair wrote and produced it; Clinton Sparks also received producer credit.
 * Bloody Mary isn't in italic
 * Don't wikilink single
 * Typo: alo → also
 * "part of Lady Gaga's", simplify to Gaga
 * Add the The Last Temptation of Christ's release year in brackets
 * "Bloody Mary" is a slow-tempo → It is a slow-tempo
 * Are Prefixmag and MuuMuse reliable?
 * In November 2022, the song → In November 2022, "Bloody Mary"
 * in streams of "Bloody Mary" → in the song's streams
 * Put the sentence "On March 15, 2023," in the past
 * is Season Two in caps? I don't think so
 * "number 13", only 13
 * The word "entered"is repetitive
 * "Marry the Night" is overlinked
 * After "number 31", delete all "number" words
 * Again, simplify to just Gaga
 * during the "absurdly bouncable beats" of "Bloody Mary" → during the "absurdly bouncable beats" of the song
 * Images and references are fine
 * Copy violation score is at 65.3%, but it's only because of the blockquote from Popjustice.

until all of the issues are fixed. Gaga Nutella talk 04:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your review. I've addressed your notes, except for these:
 * I didn't add a year to The Last Temptation of Christ, because the whole sentence is a quote, and it's not part of what the outlet said. Also, I cannot be sure if they meant the 1955 novel or the 1988 film by Scorsese, so I think it's better not to write anything.
 * Are Prefixmag and MuuMuse reliable?
 * MuuMuse has been used in several Gaga articles with good article status, such as "Applause", "Born This Way", "Venus", "Monster", "Dope", "Til It Happens To You", etc.
 * Prefixmag doesn't exist anymore, but it used to be a reliable source, the review aggregator AnyDecentMusic? calculated Prexifmag review into their consensus on Born This Way (http://www.anydecentmusic.com/review/3125/Lady-Gaga-Born-This-Way.aspx). Sricsi (talk) 11:38, 16 March 2023 (UTC)
 * That's great! I've just edited little details as well. Your contribution to this article was incredible! ✅ now. Gaga Nutella talk 15:02, 16 March 2023 (UTC)