Talk:Bloody Monday raid

Tags for Tone
While I believe there is merit in the use of the quotes throughout the article, I have tagged the article due to their use as sensational eye-catchers in what should otherwise be a neutral, statement of fact. I think a couple of them could be successfully worked into the article as they provide context and viewpoints, but the way they are currently indented, bolded, and displayed is more akin to how a journal article would portray them, not an academic summary of a historical event. --Slazenger (Contact Me) 07:24, 13 May 2022 (UTC)


 * I believe I have revised the page to be more suitable with Wikipedia's format. I left only two quote blocks in the "Air Strike Phase" section of the article, all others were either removed entirely or worked into the article. Would it be acceptable to leave those two remaining quotes or should I do away with them entirely? Whoopsawa (talk) 05:54, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey there @Whoopsawa - I think those quotes still add value.  This article may be of some use to you as well as to how best to include the quotes: Wikipedia:Quotations.  Article's looking much better now!  --Slazenger (Contact Me) 09:01, 19 May 2022 (UTC)