Talk:Blown Away (Carrie Underwood song)/GA1

GA Review
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Hi! My review for "Blown Away" will start shortly. CyrockingSmiler (talk) 15:36, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

Links

 * Disambiguation: None found.
 * External: They are okay.

Prose

 * Lead
 * "Underwood said that when she heard first the song, she already had ideas of a possible video for it, and wanted it to be a dark Wizard of Oz in 2012" A semi-colon would be better instead of a comma after "already had ideas of a possible video for it"
 * "It earned the singer" It earned "Underwood" would be better


 * Writing and composition
 * "...she started to work on her fourth studio album, then untitled." Which was should be inserted before then untitled


 * Critical response
 * "elevate this cinematic tune to an instant classic." [They further commented], "When the girl shuts herself in the storm cellar, leaving her alcoholic father passed out on the couch in the path of a twister, you can almost feel the wind."
 * "Chris Richards of The Washington Post gave the song a mixed review, deeming the lyrics as "gripping", but [negatively] comparing the instrumentation to the ones of Taylor Swift songs"
 * "Bobby Peacock of Rough Stock" If "Rough Stock" is a printed publication, it should be italicized. If not, then it's okay.


 * Chart performance
 * "Blown Away" also peaked at number 27 in Canada, and is Underwood's first song to chart in the United Kingdom, reaching number 155 [insert comma here] despite not having a proper release in the country


 * Accolades
 * Everything is alright.


 * Music video
 * "As her abusive father arrives, he asks if she needs help but she denies, gathering her things and leaving the room; however, as the *daughter stands up, he grabs her arm to make her stay, yet she pulls it away and leaves." This sentence seems odd. Try breaking it down into smaller ones.
 * "The singer revealed" Underwood said
 * "As the video continues, we see the daughter" the daughter is seen
 * "The daughter enters the house and stares her father" stares [at] her father
 * "alcoholic drink bottle" a bottle of alcohol would sound better


 * Live performances
 * The name of author is Amy Sciarretto. It has been misspelled in both the text and the link as "Sciaretto".


 * Charts and certifications
 * Everything seems fine.
 * The order of precedence has only one entry, so it is unnecessary to collapse the table.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

I fixed all the errors. So in my opinion, this article is adequate for GA classification. Good job! CyrockingSmiler (talk) 09:45, 11 August 2014 (UTC)