Talk:Blue Army (Poland)/Archive 2

Nonreliable source
Goldstein, Edward. |Jews in Haller's Army. The Galitzianer, the quarterly journal of Gesher Galicia, May 2002. Not a peer-reviewed journal, per the website : The Galitzianer is a quarterly journal focused on Galicia, covering topics of interest to Jewish family historians. Members and nonmembers contribute articles and suggestions for articles on a variety of subjects on Galician history and society, travel experiences, photos, research results, advice on obtaining records, and stories from their own Galicia family history. Town and regional research groups and town historians provide updates to each issue.

I'm not inclined to remove the material (although perhaps it ought to be removed given that it doesn't meet wikipedia criteria for reliability), the info doesn't seem particularly controversial, but given the nature of the source its info ought to be trimmed down or presented as such.Faustian (talk) 20:04, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Civilian atrocities
Please note that these two sections should be combined Haller's Army and Jews and Jews in Haller's Army... I see absolutely no need to have two separate sections devoted to the Jewish subject in this case. It seems unusually ethnocentric! The new section does detail and describe the allegations of pogroms against Ukrainians and Jews in Lwow that took place in a era of significant ethnic tension at the end of WWI, and also notes the service of Jews in the Haller's Blue Army. But, to include such inflammatory quotes given the fact that there is serious doubt as to where the Blue Army was at that time, and to concentrate only on Jewish victims, and omit any significant mention the Ukrainian casualties is again, very ethnocentric and bias. Instead a section about alleged civilian atrocities is much more appropriate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.118.227.161 (talk) 02:44, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Please read the discussion above on this page. There are reliable sources that state the Blue Army engaged in atrocities against the Jews. If you can find reliable sources that say otherwise, we'll add them to the article too. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 02:51, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Again, the new section does detail and describe the allegations of pogroms against Ukrainians and Jews in Lwow that took place in a era of significant ethnic tension at the end of WWI, and also notes the service of Jews in the Haller's Blue Army. NO ONE IS DENYING THESE ALLEGATIONS. But to have two sections devoted to the Jewish subject is highly bias and ethnocentric! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.118.227.161 (talk) 03:06, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Your "new section" removed referenced information, which is unacceptable.Faustian (talk) 03:35, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * This is unacceptable what you Malik Shabazz and Faustian are doing... it's a form of Wiki Terrorism pushing a personal agenda... the last two sections engage in blatant and obsessive ethnocentrism. Instead of providing facts, it goes on a RANT about the jewish subject in this case, and even omitting other victims such as the Ukrainian. The new section does NOT omit anything... it acknowledges the civilian atrocities jewish and Ukrainian alike.


 * On this page there were four sections... two about the Blue Army "History" and "Order of battle"... and two about the jewish subject, "Haller's Army and Jews" and "Jews in Haller's Army" What is this article about? The Blue Army or Jewish civilians? NONSENSE... UTTER NONSENSE!!! Thanks to people like you Wikipedia is loosing its fairness... stop pushing your ethnocentrism!!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.118.227.161 (talk) 03:50, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Please stop lying about what you are doing. You keep deleting a paragraph about atrocities committed by the Blue Army against the Jews. You don't add anything. So stop pretending this has anything to do with Ukrainians. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 04:11, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Because I don't want to violate 3R, I won't edit until this is cleared up. But I found another source with reference: . I will add it once the disruptions are halted. I will add: Although Haller's Army has been highly regarded by Poles, Jews remember it as a group that went around shaving Jewish beards [a form of ritual humiliation - F]. Antony Polonsky. (1990). 'My brother's keeper?': recent Polish debates on the Holocaust . Institute for Polish-Jewish Studies (Oxford, England) pg. 100. I will then add accounts from Jewish newspapers about looting and plundering of Jews by Haller's army, such as here . That will be described simply as an account from a newspaper.  I have not seen any information about Haller's army harming Ukrainian civilians but if a reliable source includes this info than of course it ought to be added. As should any info from reliable sources that claim that the army didn't harm Jews.Faustian (talk) 04:16, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * I haven't looked exactly at the actual issue underlying the edit warring that's been going on, but, Faustian, both these sources are problematic, at least for the purposes that you seem to indent to use them for. The first one specifically says that it is referring to perceptions. It even says "What is important here is not facts themselves but the way in which they have been seen and remembered". This does not at all support the inclusion of the text you propose. The way you seem to want to put it into the article is actually quite misleading and bordering on straight up POV pushing done via out-of-context citation. Yes, you have "Jews remember it..." in there but you are still misrepresenting the gist, and purpose of that quote.
 * Likewise the second source is a PRIMARY source and in fact it only mentions Haller's army in passing. You can't use this.
 *  Volunteer Marek  04:48, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The perceptions are noteworthy, although of course they should be labelled as such.Faustian (talk) 15:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * More: Encyclopedia Judaica . "Responsible for the murder of Jews and anti-Jewish pogroms in Galicia and the Ukraine." pg. 281Faustian (talk) 04:24, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * And here you have a tertiary source - an encyclopedia - which while not exactly prohibited, should be avoided, especially for controversial claims. It looks like you have some reliable sources up above which capture the essence of these statements you want to include, so why not just stick with those? (Add: I'd skip Hagen though, just on the basis of common sense/factual editorial judgement).  Volunteer Marek   04:54, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm inclined to agree about Hagen - that part should be significantly shortened because this article isn't about Hagen and whether or not he was correct about Haller's Army.Faustian (talk) 15:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * This is crazy and you are clearly BIAS Faustian! NO ONE IS DENYING THAT THE ATROCITIES HAPPENED, and by you saying that Ukrainians don't matter show what your agenda is... just cause YOU can't find anything here in North American on the subject does not mean that this never happened. This is a very basic article yet you insist on documenting in obsessive detail only one issue out of the entire history of this "Blue Army". And in a "propaganda" style quote exaggerated sources. Looting and humiliation during the war only happened to jewish civilians? Really? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.118.227.161 (talk) 04:55, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Perhaps you should have tried to find reliable sources documenting Haller's army's actions against Ukrainian and put them into the article, instead of removing referenced information about actions against Jewish people.Faustian (talk) 15:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Remember that even "period sources" were at times greatly exaggerated to create anger within the target population, so you should abstain form using the most extreme of descriptions. Most of all, you should note that there are conflicting accounts of the exact whereabouts of the Blue Army — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.118.227.161 (talk) 04:56, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Please note that the issue of removing sourced information has been confirmed by the administrator Volunteer Marek... he stated that I have correctly took out material in question which was POV... and you can see his direct quote below.. and also on the discussion page.

"but, Faustian, both these sources are problematic, at least for the purposes that you seem to indent to use them for. The first one specifically says that it is referring to perceptions. It even says "What is important here is not facts themselves but the way in which they have been seen and remembered". This does not at all support the inclusion of the text you propose. The way you seem to want to put it into the article is actually quite misleading and bordering on straight up POV pushing done via out-of-context citation."

So,before you restrict my access you should really read the discussion page. Some people are dumping POV's onto Wikipedia and then claim it was sourced material! Not only that, when one administrator does not agree with them they go to another who will support his view. SHAME!!!

AND AGAIN PLEASE UNRESTRICT MY ACCESS UNDER IP ADDRESS 76.118.227.161 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.162.211.76 (talk) 15:03, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * VM was referring to what I posted here on this discussion page, not to the referenced information you removed from the article. Nice try.Faustian (talk) 15:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * And... you don't think that the section that I took out is of the same character that what you wanted to post earlier, and MV refused to accept. Your credibility is very dubious... obsessively ethnocentric and bias. What you quoted of Pavel Korzec is not a first hand account, its a literary flourish intentionally designed to arouse anger within the designated target population. Also, you constantly discredit yourself by trying to make this section about the Jewish victims only, and omit any significant mention of the civilian and/or Ukrainian victims. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.162.211.76 (talk) 15:30, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Edit warring and personal attacks.Faustian (talk) 16:04, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Faustian you are in violation of so many wiki rule's its unbelievable! You restrict access to users and call them vandals when they have the right to edit. When someone removes material, and give a reason like I did above... it's not Vandalism! Also, yet another user Volunteer Marek called your neutrality into question, and you went ahead to include the highly inflammatory and bias claims anyway. You Faustian are not new to these allegations... this past January user: Hallersarmy made similar claims of "wiki terrorism" against you! At this point I do not have good faith in your editing, and I will make the assertion that you a bully. I will expose your nonsense to everyone!

'''YOU CENSORED ME BY BLOCKING MY IP ACCESS, AND THAN WENT ON TO ADD HIGHLY BIAS AND QUESTIONABLE MATERIAL. PEOPLE LIKE YOU ARE DESTROYING WIKIPEDIA. EVERY ONE CAN SEE YOUR DISREGARD FOR RULES JUST BY LOOKING AT THE DISCUSSION ABOVE!!! --Xiiiiix (talk) 05:02, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Name
In 2009 this article was moved from Blue Army to Blue Army (Poland) without any discussion. A quick look at "what links to Blue Army" suggests that most links refer to the this Polish unit (and still have not been fixed despite two years passing). I'd suggest moving this back to Blue Army, and moving the current disambiguation to Blue Army (disambiguation). Thoughts? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 05:30, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

Serious violations of neutrality
At this point I feel like serious intervention is required on the issue of neutrality for is page. We are running a very long discussion, and there are so many significant problems that still need to be addressed... never mind some of the quotes used, there are still major issues with how things are presented and worded in an overall context. Please see one examples below of what I'm talking about:

''"After the Great War ended, the units were transferred to Poland, where they took part in the Polish-Ukrainian War and the Polish-Bolshevik War, during which they engaged in anti-Jewish violence." '' The way this opening sentence is phrased in the introductory paragraph, and the prominence of the Anti-Jewish actions section further down page, gives the reader a false impression that the Blue Army's primary role during the war was to deal with Jew only... in a kind of similar fashion as the Waffen-SS (Schutzstaffel), a para-military organization specifically designed for the purpose of dealing with Jewish civilians, who were deemed enemies of the state. I categorical object to such misrepresentations that are thinly veiled in the overall presentation and wording of the text.


 * Not really. The bit about anti-Jewish violence is the third thing mentioned, not the first. Thus, this in no way implies that this was their primary role.  Haller's Army's role in anti-Jewish violence was prominant enough that it warrants a brief mention in the lede. IF you would suggest other ways of mentioning it in the lede let's have it.Faustian (talk) 02:42, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * If you look at the overall makeup of the page... you see the following sections: Formation and Service on the Western Front, Transport to Poland, Fighting in Galicia and Volhynia and last but not least Anti-Jewish actions as if everything before led to the culmination of this final and ultimate goal. I think the Schutzstaffel has a similar page structure. Even the name of the disputed section "Anti-Jewish actions" comes across as if it was the central goal of all field operations conducted by the entire Blue Army. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 03:42, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * So let's get this straight. If we mention the anti-Jewish actions first, it overemphasizes them because they're mentuioned first. If it mentions them last, it overemphasizes them because it makes it look as if everything builds up to them. I guess you'd prefer they not be mentioned at all, even though it's a major part of what they did and what they are known for.Faustian (talk) 04:20, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * At this point I really believe that a personal agenda is at play here, due your refusal to compromise in any way. The language that you are using, and some examples you provide are in violation of Due and undue weight rule. Not even the Schutzstaffel page has that kind of salacious details within it's text. The language used is misleading designed to discredit all of the Blue Army. Also, please provide a response for the statement below. It seems that you are omitting the real issue here. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 17:13, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Please avoid personal attacks.Faustian (talk) 18:11, 25 November 2011 (UTC)

The Blue Army was a regular military force, whose primary objective was to fight other military entities. And, during the course of regular military operations some groups of soldiers did participate in acts of looting, violence, and humiliation against Ukrainian, Jewish and Russian civilians. But, you would not know this by the way the current page is structured, where undue weight is give only to the Jewish victims as if they were the primary, and only target of the entire Blue Army.

Whether intentional or not, the current page structure is creating the wrong idea about what the Blue Army really was. Because of such serious misrepresentations there needs to be a thorough review of this page by neutral, and experienced wiki editors.

At this point the current makeup of the page violates a number of wiki neutrality rules, such as: Balance, Due and undue weight, Article structure, and Manual of Style/Words to watch. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 02:32, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Just because you say it violates these things, doesn't mean it does. Neutrality means that it provides all viewpoints. If I had found reliable sources that contradicted the descriptions of members of the Blue Army's crimes against Jews, I certainly would have include them in the article, in order to insure neutrality. I have not. Neither, apparently, have you; otherwise you would have included them in the article, rather than try to have reliably sourced information removed instead.Faustian (talk) 18:11, 25 November 2011 (UTC)

Nuetrality Tag
Ok Faustian, while the above user was clearly being disruptive it seems like your response has been some kind of over-reaction completely the other way. You've started going out there trying to find anything negative you can find and stuffing it all into the article. It looks like you've even given up on trying to actually approach the subject neutrally. And in doing so you've started using sources which, as I mentioned above, should not be used to cite controversial claims and cherry picked the sources you are using. Hence the tag.  Volunteer Marek  08:14, 22 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Could you please specifically outline which of the additions to the article you have a problem with, and how? I acknowledged your points from this discussion and therefore did not include refernces from the encyclopedia into this article. From our previous discussion page I only included one source - about how the Blue Army was perceived within the Jewish community.  And in this article it was clearly presented that way - the Jewish perception (quote from article "Although Haller's Army has been highly regarded by Poles, Jews remember it as a group that engaged in antisemitic acts").  The source didn't go either way on the atrocities themselves (the source wasn't about them). With respect to the atrocities, I used other souces, and clearly referenced.


 * My approach here has been quite nuetral. That, is, I did not specifically seek out negative information and leave out positive information. My methods was this: in response to the anon's disruptions I started looking more into this topic, and put whatever I found into the article; if I had come across any reliable source that cast doubt on the existence of these actions I would have included it. The only "exculpatory" bit of info I found was that Haller himself issued proclamations forbidding his troops from cutting off the beards of Orthodox Jews. I included this info in the article. How is my approach not nuetral? Faustian (talk) 14:17, 22 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Let's look at the specific additions I made that casued VM to place a nuetrality tag on the article and to accuse me of editing in bad faith:


 * "Although Haller's Army has been highly regarded by Poles, Jews remember it as a group that engaged in antisemitic acts". Original source quote: "One such example is the General Haller's Army, so highly regarded by Poles. In the collective memory of Jews Haller's soldiers are remembered as people who went about shaving off Jewish people's beards. What is important here is not facts themselves but the way in which they have been seen and remembered." Source: Antony Polonsky. (1990). My brother's keeper?: recent Polish debates on the Holocaust. Institute for Polish-Jewish Studies: Oxford, England. pg. 100. Read it here. So how would you reword that to make it nuetral?  It is an accurate summary of how Jews remember Haller's army, accordin to the relaible source..


 * "Haller's soldiers and officers legitimized acts of violence against Jews by claiming that they were acts of national self-defence, and generally believed that Jews collaborated with Poland's enemies, such as Ukrainians, Bolsheviks and Lithuanians." Original quote: "The tendency to legitimize anti-Jewish violence as national self-defense was first found in the speech and actions of officers and soldiers of the Haller and Wiekopolska armies in the eastrern territoies between 1918 and 1919. In general these officers and soldiers shared the convictions that the Jews as a collectivity were the enemy of the Polish nation-state and that they collaborated with other enemies - the Bolsheviks, the Ukrainians, and the Lithuanians." Source: Joanna B. Michlic. (2006). Poland's threatening other: the image of the Jew from 1880 to the present . University of Nebraska Press, pg. 117. Read it on googlebooks.


 * "As they travelled East, Haller's soldiers plundered Jewish houses, pushed Jews off moving trains, and with their bayonets cut off the beards of Orthodox Jews, particularly the elderly, as crowds watched. The latter acts were referred to by Haller's soldiers as "civilizing" the Jews". Original quote. " The Polish troops, in particular 'Haller's boys' and the regiments from Great Poland (the western province of Poland), engaged in violence, looting and other atrocities against Jews. At every railwary station on their way east, the soldiers harrassed each passing Jew and sacked the nearby houses. Very often the Jews were pushed off the moving trains. 'Haller's boys' and the 'Poznan boys' specialized in 'civilizing' the Jews: the caught Orthodox Jews, especially the aged, and cut off their beards with bayonets in the presence of excited mobs. Officers and police tacitly approved of these barbaric acts." Source: Pavel Korzec. (1993). Polish-Jewish Relations During World War I. In Hostages of modernization: studies on modern antisemitism, 1870-1933/39, Volume 2 Herbert Strauss, Ed. Walter de Gruyter: pp.1034-1035. Available through googlebooks.


 * "Haller's soldiers also engaged in the rape of Jewish women and girls." Original quote: "After the first world war the soldiers of the Polish army and gangs of maruaders were wreaking havoc on the Jewish population, excelled in that mater the Polish soldiers from Gen. Haller's army, known from their anti-Semitism, they robbed Jewish property and raped Jewish women and girls." Source: Amon Rubin. (2005). The rise and fall of the Jewish Communities in Poland and their relics today: District Lublin Ann Arbor: University of Michigan, pg. 49. Seen through googlebooks. This is the only reference to rape I found (the other crimes have several references) so I've cahnged it int he article. It currently reads: "Isolated reports also accuse Haller's soldiers of engaging in the rape of Jewish women and girls."


 * My impression is that VM has incorrectly assumed that I had ignored the discussion and placed information from newspaper articles etc. into this article, which is something I did not do. VM, please address these points, and retract your accusations against me. Respectfully, Faustian (talk) 18:26, 22 November 2011 (UTC)


 * On the first one, the important sentence is "What is important here is not facts themselves but the way in which they have been seen and remembered" which gives the statement a different context. Furthermore, the very same paragraph explicitly states "But as soon as we have said this that Jews during the last hundred years were not a homogenous group; their views were far from uniform". In other words the speaker is warning against making blanket statements along the lines of "The Jews this" or "The Jews that". Finally, this is an off-hand example given in an interview with Stanislaw Krajewski. Krajewski is certainly reliable but this is an interview and not even the focus of the interview itself.


 * On the last one, since it's just a snippet and the only source you've found, and it's a very strong controversial claim, perhaps it would be better to leave it out.


 * I'll comment on the other two in a little bit. Other than that though, last time I was looking at sources for this article I recall there were some which discussed other details. For example one source talked about how it was mostly foreign-born (particularly American) Haller's troops (of Polish ethnicity) who were responsible for most of the excesses. Another problem in the current article is the discussion of Haller. Here it says that his officers tried to legitimize the violence. Haller himself however was strongly appalled and threatened court martial. Pilsudski was pissed off (he didn't much like Haller either I think). In the article we do have it say that he issued a proclamation but the way it's written is pretty non-neutral - as in "Haller himself..." - as opposed to having someone else do it?


 * Also, you agreed above that it'd be a good idea to remove Hagen. Can we do that?  Volunteer Marek   19:31, 22 November 2011 (UTC)


 * With respect to the first source, I think it's notable that Jewish and Polish impressions of Haller differ. How about if I reword it into "Although Poles traditionally view Haller's army as being heroic, Jewish views are generally negative."  I'm not sure how the rest of the paragraph from the first source changes the context. The author summarizes the perception, says that this is only thr perception (without making a judgment about its accuracy) but notes that it is not universal.  About the last source - it's not that controversial given that pillaging, throwing off trains, and ritual humiliation by cutting off beards is well-established by other sources. If that were not the case, I would agree with you. Hoqwever, although multiple sources ascribe other crimes to Haller's army, this is the only one specifically mentioning rape so we indeed ought to be cautious with it. I think that the way I changed it, into "Isolated reports also accuse Haller's soldiers of engaging in the rape of Jewish women and girls."  is cautious. It describes what's been written in a reliable source but presents it in a way that lets the reader know that this is not reported widely and it not definitely the Truth.


 * I'm not sure what you find non-neutral about mentioning Haller himself ordering his troops to stop cutting off Jews' beards. The original source states "General Haller publishes a proclamation in Porana, signed by Polish, English and French representatives, ordering his troops to stop the cutting of beards of Jews." This article is about Haller's army not just Haller. From what I've read (but didn't include in this article, since it's about the Blue Army not the man), Haller was affiliated with the Endek movement which was quite antisemitic, and after the war he defended the quota of Jewish students allowed in universities. However he opposed beard cutting by his troops (understandable even for an antisemite, as it was bad PR for Poland). The point is that Haller ordered the troops to stop doing this.


 * About Hagen - here is my thinking. Although he is mistaken, his claim is out there.  So, it would be good to note his claim and to then debunk it. I think the Hagen part can be shortened further though, and turned into a single sentence.Faustian (talk) 05:34, 23 November 2011 (UTC)


 * I am vaguely familiar with the above issues. I think the article should certainly mention the controversies surrounding the anti-semitism of the Blue Army, and I think we all agree on that. If I understand the debate here correctly, we are working on the due weight and neutrality wording for this issue, based on sources available, yes? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 05:33, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

The IP that got banned posted this to my talk page. Regardless of the fact that this user got banned (and I still think it was a case of certain admins being too eager to jump in with the ban hammer against an unestablished, and hence, "weak" user) I do think he raises some important concerns. Specifically, the "worst" in the Korzec quote, without any context seems to be POV. Likewise the role of German propaganda in exaggerating the reports of the events is completely missing from the article.  Volunteer Marek  04:22, 24 November 2011 (UTC)


 * If you find a reliable source describing German propaganda's role about Haller's army's actions (the IP's description was about the Lviv pogrom, not Haller's actions, and the quote about the German propaganda claim was an old newspaper article not a peer-reviewed or scholarly work, and we've agreed not to use such sources haven't we?) then put it in. But be careful to do so in a way that does not imply that the cited facts in this article are such German propaganda. We should not assume that the info cited in this article is the product of German propaganda. Primary sources from 1919 or 1920 might have been, but they aren't cited in this article.  The authors cited here on this article certainly aren't German propagandists and it is OR (at best) to suggest without evidence that their work is merely a copy German propaganda and/or the authors were fooled by it.


 * Here is Korzec's quote from the chapter "Polish-Jewish Relations During World War I": "In the martyrology of the Polish Jews during the years 1918-1920 the Haller's boys (Hallerczycy) won sad repute as the worst tortuters of the Jews." Korzec later describes, as facts, numerous bad things that Haller's soldiers did to Jews (pushing them off trains, cutting their beards with bayonets, etc.) that indicate that the "worst torturers" wasn't just a baseless perception. The wikipedia article, citing Korzec's chapter, states "Haller's troops established a reputation as, in the words of scholar Pavel Korzec, 'the worst torturers of Jews.'" Is that an inaccurate description of what the source - clearly a reliable one - states? If it's not inaccurate, then why is there a problem with it? Faustian (talk) 05:25, 24 November 2011 (UTC)


 * On the first issue, I'm not sure what source specifically you're referring to. In regard to the German propaganda, there's a little bit here : "On May 1, 1919, a French source in Copenhagen warned that the Germans were writing anti-Semitic tracts that were to be attributed to Haller's army" and "Paderewski identified Tattenbach, the German consul in Berne, as advocating the increased use of anti-Jewish pogroms in Poland and Galicia to counter Polish claims". The sources given for both statements are "FMAE" - unfortunately the first part of the book is unavailable which makes it hard to figure out what this is exactly. If we could find out then that would make it easier to find further sources.  Volunteer Marek   07:07, 24 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Paderweski is himself an extrmely unreliable source (indeed, a propagandist himself) so his claims ought to be viewed with considerable caution. He claimed that the West Ukrainian People's Republic were Bolsheviks after all. The French were also hardly nuetral objective sources. The best thing to do is stick to what reliable sources conclude, which is what the article currently does. Not to go to French reports or claims by Polish officials from 90 years ago.Faustian (talk) 14:07, 24 November 2011 (UTC)


 * All sources have a POV and a bias. As already mentioned, a good part of this stuff comes by the way of post War German propaganda. If reliable sources report what French intelligence and Paderewski said then we can use it.  Volunteer Marek   00:47, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
 * There's a difference between a reliable surce basing conclusions on whatever primary sources the reliable source chooses, and simply reprinting those primary sources. So if a source uses Paderweski or the Ferench diplomats, or the German diplomats, that's okay. But finding a quiote from one of the latter in a footnote or an exerpt and presenting it as reliable itself, is another matter (unless, I suppose, the reliable source states something like "Paderweski was correct when he stated..."). At any rate, the stuff you mention does not relate specifically, to what is placed in the article so it would seem to be OR to claim that it debunks it.Faustian (talk) 02:37, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * I would like to ask that the following phrase be struck down.

''After their arrival to Eastern Europe Haller's troops engaged in looting, violence and atrocities against Jews.[11] Haller's troops established a reputation as, in the words of scholar Pavel Korzec, "the worst torturers of Jews." '' The main reason for this request is the use of the term "worst torturers of Jews." to describe anti-jewish acts attributed to the Blue Army. Per Wikipedia rule found on Manual of Style/Words to watch, phrases that include words such as "best", "worst", and "great" are considered Puffery and should not be used. I am aware that this phrase is a quote made by a Pavel Korzec, but it is still a point of view, and not many people would consider the Blue Army as the "worst torturers of Jews" surly they were not worst than the Roman Legions, the Tsarist authorities, Wehrmacht, or even the SS. And, to support this claim I would like to note that such a rule is found on Neutral point of view which discourages users from posting statements that give undue significance to a personal points of view. Please see the excerpt below:

''Accurately indicate the relative prominence of opposing views. Ensure that the reporting of different views on a subject adequately reflects the relative levels of support for those views, and that it does not give a false impression of parity, or give undue weight to a particular view. For example, to state that "According to Simon Wiesenthal, the Holocaust was a program of extermination of the Jewish people in Germany, but David Irving disputes this analysis" would be to give apparent parity between the supermajority view and a tiny minority view by assigning each to a single activist in the field.''

Finally, the entire statement in question repeats the facts about looting and violence. Than, the next sentence restates those very same facts, but in greater details. So there is no need for the preceding sentence which only clutters the section. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 23:37, 24 November 2011 (UTC)


 * A statement about how Haller's Army is perceived by the Jews is noteworthy, and this comes from a reliable source. We shouldn't exclude perceptions just because they are negative. Faustian (talk) 02:37, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Here on Wikipedia it is the readers job to create his own perceptions, negative or not. Editors provide the facts only, not ready made points of view. And, I think that Wiki rules noted above are clear on that. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 03:42, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * What Jews in general think about Haller's Army is a fact. Here on wikipedia our job is to record what reliable sources say about things, including what reliable sources say about perceptions, and to present them in a nuetral manner. So whatever is said about Haller's Army from reliable sources gets reported. If a lot of it happens to be bad, then it gets reported.Faustian (talk) 04:23, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Faustian, you are opening up a can of worms here... again despite what you think. It is not our job to write what the Poles or Jews think of Blue Army. And, you made the article event more out of line by adding this sentence.


 * If what Jews think about Haller's army is notable enought to be mentioned in more than one reliable surce, it deserves mention in this article. Which it is. Faustian (talk) 18:46, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Although Haller's Army has been highly regarded by Poles, Jews generally see it more negatively.


 * Again, this article needs outside assistance in correcting its neutrality problems. The issues that were created by your editing are very large. If you look at my very first edit (that you had me blocked for), you will notice that the only thing I did was to remove the Pavel Korzec quote and re-named the section "Allegations of atrocities" that gives the section a more balanced perspective to include all civilians, and to show that this was not the doing of the entire Blue Army, but by groups of individual soldiers who did engage in acts of looting, violence and humiliation against Jewish and Ukrainian civilians. And to give you a great example that such unfortunate things do happen in war time, all you have to do is look at the United States Military. Humiliation (Abu Ghraib), Violence (US Army 5th Stryker Brigade thrill killings), and Looting (the whole episode of the US military allowing Iraqi looters to go wild after the fall of Baghdad), Yet I don't see any mention of such human right violations on the US army page whether it happened in Iraq, Afghanistan or even Vietnam for that matter. Also, I don't see any quotes by regional historians that berate the US Millitry to show what many Muslims think. That's because of the Due and undue weight rule. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 17:13, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * You removed much referenced information and were blocked for edit warring after you kept removing it, even though three other editors restored the information that you removed. For someone who claims to be new to wikipedia you seem to have a strong idea of what wikipedia is about. You do not seem to be very contructive now, either. I hope by this statement you aren't admitting that you don't want to see info about human rights violations mentioned in this article. Because given your statment above, and your behavior, this seems to be what is motivating your actions. Faustian (talk) 18:25, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * In terms of outside assistance - most editors here have restored the information that you tried to remove. I would be happy to file an RFC on this topic if you feel this would help resolve the issue.Faustian (talk) 18:46, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Now you are not even addressing the issue, but trying to divert attention on me. Your accusations that I'm some kind of hidden entity who is so skilled in Wikipedia edits is unfounded, let me tell you... it does not take a genius to type in the phrase: "Wikipedia neutral point of view" on Google and start reading. Not only that, you are accusing me of totally trying to remove the subject of atrocities, which in not the case at all. My primary argument is that the neutrality of the page has been compromised and rules such as Balance, Due and undue weight, Article structure, and Manual of Style/Words to watch have been violated. Below I'm including my earlier statement on how the content of this page is creating a false impression.


 * The Blue Army was a regular military force, whose primary objective was to fight other military entities. And, during the course of regular military operations some groups of soldiers did participate in acts of looting, violence, and humiliation against Ukrainian, Jewish and Russian civilians. But, you would not know this by the way the current page is structured, where undue weight is give only to the Jewish victims as if they were the sole and primary target of the entire Blue Army.


 * Not even the Waffen-SS and the Schutzstaffel pages include such an overwhelming preoccupation with Jewish subject matter. At this point there needs to be an impartial review of the content. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 20:07, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * There are entire articles devoted to the crimes of the SS, thus no reason to include many details in the general articles. Do you suggest that an article be created about the crimes of Haller's Army and that a brief summary of his army's crimes be included in this article? In my opinion both subject matters are not significant enough to warrant seperate articles but I am open to the alternative, depending on what others think.


 * The reason why the crimes against Jews are mentioned in the article is because such crimes are mentioned in the literature (that is, in relaible peer-reviewed sources). The fact that crimes against Ukrainians are mentioned less frequently in the literature (and thus in the article) is not an excuse to remove information about Jews.Faustian (talk) 22:25, 25 November 2011 (UTC)


 * I propose a couple of changes that are based on an article that you may be familiar with as a active conributor to pages on Ukrainian hitory, this page being that of Bohdan Khmelnytsky. It includes the same belligerents, but of course from a different time, and with many similar accusations of atrocities.


 * So, if you notice the progression of edits from the first one to the current on the Bohdan Khmelnytsky page, you will notice that there was a very large focus on Jewish victims in the "Pogroms" section, and the examples used were very incendiary. But, over time the section was re-configured and renamed as "Khmelnytsky Remembered", then the section was divided into sub-sections based on ethnicity. There is a Jewish sub-section which details its perspective, and linked with the Khmelnytsky Uprising page to include more details. But, the whole section is more objective since it does not single out anyone ethnic group for its title, and many of the blood curling details, and incendiary quotes have been removed to give it a more academic perspective.


 * So, what I propose is squarely based on the Khmelnytsky model, which was debated far more that the Blue Army page ever was. First, I propose that the phrase "during which they engaged in anti-Jewish violence" be removed from the introductory paragraph, since it was not the defining norm for the entire Blue Army, but was instead the result of undisciplined groups of soldiers who clearly were antisemitic. Also, I propose that the Pavel Korzec quote be removed for the reasons I listed previously. Finally, the "Anti-Jewish actions" section should made part of the entire "History" section and be renamed "Critisism" Detailing Ukrainian and Jewish perspectives (keeping your text) thus creating a neutral perspective, yet at the same time listing the grievances leveled against the army.


 * I would like to go ahead and proceed with the edit. Than after your review we can make adjustments to make the page even more balanced. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 01:45, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

(Outdent) Thank you for the constructive approach. The problem with the Khmelytski comparison is that there is enough material on, and the topic is notable enough for, two seperate articles: one about the Blue Army and another one about its actions. With respect to the Khmelnytski article, the one about the uprising does indeed include plenty of unpleasant facts about what happened to Jews and others. This topic is less significant, so it all goes into this one article.

The lead of an article summarizes everything in the article. See Manual of Style/Lead section. "The lead should be able to stand alone as a concise overview. It should define the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is interesting or notable, and summarize the most important points—including any prominent controversies. The emphasis given to material in the lead should roughly reflect its importance to the topic, according to reliable, published sources, and the notability of the article's subject is usually established in the first few sentences. Significant information should not appear in the lead if it is not covered in the remainder of the article."

The crimes committed against Jews are prominant enough and well-established enough in the literature that they deserve a section or subsection in the article, and therefore a brief mention in the lead is warranted. I agree that the lead must not imply that pogromming was the main activity of the Blue Army - but still, these actions ought to be mentioned and not ignored in the lead. I am quite open in terms of any ideas about how this can be done, but it must be done somehow, and not simply removed (or dismissed as "accusations" or otherwise presented as not having happened). I will try another version.

Along those lines, statements by reliable sources, unless evidence proves otherwise (for example, in the case of Hagen's placing the Blue Army in Lviv in 1918) should not be qualified by words such as "accused of" - implying that there is doubt. Doing so is basically an editor's original research. Unless there are doubts in the reliable literature about an action we just describe it, not add "accusations" etc. For example, in the article about the, it is written "With this as their battle-cry, Cossacks and the peasantry massacred a large number of Jewish and Polish-Lithuanian townsfolk, as well as szlachta during the years 1648-1649. " Not "allegedly" or "have been accused of".

As for Korzec, it is a fact that the Jews perceive Haller's army very negatively and directly quoting him (he is himself a Polish-Jewish historian) gives the reader an idea of how seriously the Blue army is perceived by Jews. Summarizing him by saying "viewed negatively" somewhat falsifies his conclusion. He wrote that Haller's army were perceived as the worst torturers of Jews. He did not write that they were merely disliekd by Jews, or were seen as not very nice, etc. They were the "worst torturers" in the perception of the Jews, according to this relaible source. I will try to write an acceptable alternative.05:57, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Follow up

Ok, I think it's much better. There are a couple minor issues and ... Hagen:

In the first paragraph of the controversies section, it switches abruptly from discussing Ukrainians to discussing Jews. The sentence beginning with "Those officers and soldiers from the Blue Army who..." should be moved to a different part of the section.

In the second paragraph it says "against the local populations" - but that's not exactly accurate. It was against *some" local populations. I think, unless they did this to the Poles as well. More importantly, looking at the source I don't see how it supports the text 'After their arrival in Western Ukraine, Haller's troops engaged in acts of looting, violence and humiliation against the local populations'. What it does talk about is how Paderewski ordered an investigation after "reports of a new wave of anti-Jewish violence" by the Blue Army. The rest of the paragraph and the section, in fact are the ones that go on to discuss how these reports were in many cases German propaganda. This needs to be changed, along both directions.

Third paragraph "Haller's troops have also been accused of allegedly committing the Lwów Pogrom of 1918. Historian William W. Hagen states that ..." - I thought we were more or less in agreement to remove Hagen since he's just plain wrong here. If we keep this then the first sentence of the para should immediately alert the reader that this charge is false.

 Volunteer Marek  22:45, 2 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I changed Hagen and moved the Ukrainian bit. As for claims about Germans, the source makes clear that this is what the Poles claimed, not that this is necessarily true. It furtherrmore quotes Poles as as also claiming that the Jews were grateful to be "liberated" by the Poles. Elsewhere in the same book, the author states that Poles also claimed that Poland was a victim of a "German-Jewish plot" against Poland, that the Lwow pogroms were the Ukrainians' fault, that "Jewish-led Bolshevism" was a menace, etc. etc. In other words, Polish claims are not treated as necessarily truth.Faustian (talk) 08:17, 4 December 2011 (UTC)


 * In addition to MV's comment I would like to continue with my original conversation. And, I think that a couple of minor changes need to be addressed. The First being the statement in the opening paragraph "While fighting in the East, soldiers from the Blue Army also engaged in antisemitic violence."


 * The issue here is again of Non-judgmental language and Due and undue weight. I'm basing my idea of removing this sentence by referring to the Khmelnytsky Uprising, and Bohdan Khmelnytsky pages, where the use of hard language was reverted. The best example being the Khmelnytsky's page where you can see a clear evolution of editing. The very early edits were basically calling him an antisemite, but they were later changed to a more academic and objective description of him simply viewing Poles and Jews as enemies. Hard words were removed, and some of the examples of barbarity were as well taken out like the mention of rapes and killings (which are a common occurrence during war time anywhere). You have to remember that the Blue Army was made up of 100,000 soldiers serving in different units, and to just label the whole army as "antisemitic" is inaccurate and unfair. A similar editing style was adopted by the US Army pages, events like My Lai Massacre and Abu Ghraib torture and prisoner abuse are mentioned in a way that is not representative of the entire fighting force, yet there are numerous examples of American soldiers exhibiting racist view against Arabs, Asians and so on. So, I recommend that the "While fighting in the East, soldiers from the Blue Army also engaged in antisemitic violence." be removed as it unfairly links the entire army with actions of a select few. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 14:02, 3 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Antisemitic acts were of a large enough scale that they were mentioned in numerous sources. Thus, the lead needs to mention them while also making sure that antisemitic acts are not portrayed as the main activity of the Blue Army. The current version does not do so. Also, the current version does use "soft" wording. It doesn't mention specific acts of violence in the lead. Violence  itself is a nuetral word that summarizes various things that were done.


 * I have not found reliable sources stating that the violence was the work of a small number of soldiers and that it was a very rare event. Have you? The sources seems to indicate that it was common among the Polish-Americsan volunteers, whose numbers were in the tens of thousands. Since the sources do not describe antisemtic violence as a rare event, we must be careful not to make it seem as if it was a rare event for this army.


 * BTW, this article is about Haller's Army, not Haller himself, so a comparison with an article about Khmelnytski himself is not quite appropriate. From Khmelnytsky Uprising, though: "The contemporary 17th century Eyewitness Chronicle (Yeven Mezulah) by Nathan ben Moses Hannover states:


 * Wherever they found the szlachta, royal officials or Jews, they [Cossacks] killed them all, sparing neither women nor children. They pillaged the estates of the Jews and nobles, burned churches and killed their priests, leaving nothing whole. It was a rare individual in those days who had not soaked his hands in blood...[11]"


 * A direct quote! Yet you wanted to remove the direct quote from the scholar Pavel Korzec from this article.Faustian (talk) 07:44, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Neutrality dispute tag
I would like to retain the Neutrality Dispute tag... due to end of the year breaks, some of the contributors including myself took a pause from editing, but I don't think that a final consensus was reached. During this time, I had a chance to look at other Wiki pages, and how they address sensitive issues such as this one. And, I still believe that the language, and format used on the Blue Army page is bias. A perfect example is that of the Cossack page, and how it was edited over time... Throughout their history Cossacks have engaged in numerous pogroms, most recently the Kiev Pogroms (1919). But, nowhere on their page is there any mention of their violence against the Jews, instead, their participation is mentioned on specific pages related to individual events... not to mentioned that the language used to describe their actions is much more subdued and academic. Also, I would like to address and research the issue of just how many of such incidents took place... same as with the Cossacks... just because some of them participated in the Kiev Pogrom, the blame is not passed on to the entire group. I think that the same standard should be applied to the Blue Army, lets not forget that it had over 100,000 men in its ranks. Finally, I would like to supplement this point by providing an example based on the US military in Iraq and Afghanistan... Again, around 130,000 US military personnel served in Iraq at the height of the war, and there were some very highly publicized incidents of racist misconduct (thrill killings, rapes, and Abu Gharib). But, we are not passing on the blame to all US service members (The US military is not labeled as "racist", but the Blue army is called "anti-Semitic"). Same standard should be applied here. So, at the end I would like to continue the discussion. --76.118.227.161 (talk) 03:43, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * The US army has millions of servicemen stationed around the world. The Cossacks have a 4000 year history. The Blue Army had 100,000 people and its principal actions were in eastern Europe after World War II where many of its members (particularly, the 20,000 or so Amerian volunteers) engaged in antisemitic actions. This article as written does not "blame the entire group." It states what the sources say, that many of its members engaged in antisemtic actions. If you would like, I can file an RFC on this issue to resolve the nuetrality issue. I'm waiting for Marek's opinion.Faustian (talk) 04:48, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * I will look over this again in more detail later. Taking a quick glance for now, it does seem like the sentence in the lede "While fighting in the East, soldiers from the Blue Army also engaged in antisemitic violence." implies that this characterized the entire formation and all the soldiers of the army. Given that Haller and others condemned whatever excesses happened and made efforts to stop them this does not appear to be an accurate implication. Volunteer Marek 05:16, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Changed!Faustian (talk) 05:38, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks. Other than that the only thing that bothers me is the Arnon Rubin sourced claim of incidence of rape, which I mentioned before. Looking at the source again, it appears this is a self-published (possibly books-on-demand) source, which would make it unreliable in this instance. Part of the reason why I was concerned before is because the quote you gave above has some pretty bad grammar/English mistakes: "Polish army and gangs of maruaders were wreaking havoc on the Jewish population, excelled in that mater the Polish soldiers from Gen. Haller's army". Looking around what's available through the sneak preview on google books there's more mistakes like this. This is a pretty good indication that the book was in fact self published - no editor or reviewer to pick these things out.
 * Other than that I think the article's pretty neutral. One could argue that the controversy section is too large relative to the article as a whole but that's more of an issue of expanding the rest of the article. Volunteer Marek 06:00, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Okay. So I'll remove the reference to rape and the nuetrality tag.Faustian (talk) 14:01, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait - the sourse for the rape claim is a book published by the University of Michigan - clearly reliable. If it's in a reliable source, it's probably a notable claim. The current wording "Isolated reports also accuse Haller's soldiers of engaging in the rape of Jewish women and girls" seems appropriately tentative about this isolated claim included in a relaible source. I'd be willing to remove it if you can exlain why, given these facts.Faustian (talk) 14:05, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * I'm not 100% sure but on gbooks when it says UoM that's usually who digitized or reprinted it, not the publisher. As far as I can tell the publisher is listed as Arnon Rubin. Volunteer Marek 14:56, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks for clearing this up! I will go ahead and remove the rape reference and nuetrality tag. If someone can can demonstrate the reliability of Arnold Rubin I will reinstate it, but I couldn't find any info on the publisher. I also could't find info confirming who the author was, although one of his other books was published by University of Tel Aviv Press: . Given the controversial nature of the claim, if the author is not a historian and it's not a reliable source it ought not be here.Faustian (talk) 15:23, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Ok thanks. In my opinion the neutrality tag can be removed. As I stated above, if someone feels that the negative stuff takes up too much space, then what needs to be done is an expansion of the other parts of the article.16:01, 9 January 2012 (UTC)

Re-adding text that was collectively agreed upon as inaccurate
Someone is re-adding sections of the text, that through previous discussions on the "Talk" were agreed upon as being inaccurate, and collectivity removed. I will thus delete the following sections listed below.

While fighting in the east, some Blue Army soldiers engaged in antisemitic violence.

Discussed on the "Talk" page: I will look over this again in more detail later. Taking a quick glance for now, it does seem like the sentence in the lede "While fighting in the East, soldiers from the Blue Army also engaged in antisemitic violence." implies that this characterized the entire formation and all the soldiers of the army. Given that Haller and others condemned whatever excesses happened and made efforts to stop them this does not appear to be an accurate implication.VolunteerMarek 05:16, 9 January 2012 (UTC)

Changed!Faustian (talk) 05:38, 9 January 2012 (UTC)

Isolated reports also accuse Haller's soldiers of engaging in the rape of Jewish women and girls.

Discussed on the "Talk" page: Thanks. Other than that the only thing that bothers me is the Arnon Rubin sourced claim of incidence of rape, which I mentioned before. Looking at the source again, it appears this is a self-published (possibly books-on-demand) source, which would make it unreliable in this instance. Part of the reason why I was concerned before is because the quote you gave above has some pretty bad grammar/English mistakes: "Polish army and gangs of maruaders were wreaking havoc on the Jewish population, excelled in that mater the Polish soldiers from Gen. Haller's army". Looking around what's available through the sneak preview on google books there's more mistakes like this. This is a pretty good indication that the book was in fact self published - no editor or reviewer to pick these things out.

Okay. So I'll remove the reference to rape and the neutrality tag.Faustian (talk) 14:01, 9 January 2012 (UTC)

It appears that someone has an agenda, and is more interested in a smear campaign, rather that maintaining Wikipedia's neutrality. I will also remove William W. Hagen's claims regarding the 1918 Lwów pogrom, as it is a "minority view" that has been solidly discredited by other historians. --91.150.222.61 (talk) 10:47, 9 April 2012 (UTC)


 * I restored the version prior to the re-adition of tinformation that I had removed. The Hagen claim is clearly described as a mistake; it's notable to include it, as long as it's described as a mistake.Faustian (talk) 11:51, 9 April 2012 (UTC)


 * The artuicle now is identical to how it had been on January 9th when we reached this version after a lengthy discussion. Please do not make more changes without discussing them first.Faustian (talk) 19:46, 9 April 2012 (UTC)


 * At this point I recommend that the article be taken up for arbitration... I have no faith that users Faustian or Malik Shabazz are editing this article in an un-bias way... every subsequent edit proves that both of them are bias. As an example, user Faustian noted above noted that he reverted the inaccurate edits, but the phrase "Some soldiers from the Blue army were involved in antisemitic actions during the struggle in the east" is still up... despite the fact that it was agreed in an earlier discussion that the statement was inaccurate! The fact that those very same phrases are being put back after they were deemed to be inaccurate and removed, shows a deep and malicious bias. I will recommend that users Faustian and Malik Shabazz be blocked, I understand that they both have a long history of Wikipedia contributions, but the evidence here is indisputable that on this subject they hold a bias, and consistently act to undermine the article's neutrality. I will revert the edit, and ask that it remain that way until arbitration is completed. --91.150.222.61 (talk) 19:04, 10 April 2012 (UTC)


 * Please get consensus for your changes before you make them again. You have not responded to the points raised by Faustian above. Instead, you're removing content and adding "alleged" in too many places. If you can't discuss it calmly, like a rational human being, maybe Wikipedia isn't the place for you. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 19:14, 10 April 2012 (UTC)


 * Please advise on how you keep missing the phrase: "Some soldiers from the Blue army were involved in antisemitic actions during the struggle in the east"... Let me remind you this:


 * '''Discussed on the "Talk" page: I will look over this again in more detail later. Taking a quick glance for now, it does seem like the sentence in the lede "While fighting in the East, soldiers from the Blue Army also engaged in antisemitic violence." implies that this characterized the entire formation and all the soldiers of the army. Given that Haller and others condemned whatever excesses happened and made efforts to stop them this does not appear to be an accurate implication.VolunteerMarek 05:16, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Changed!Faustian (talk) 05:38, 9 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Pleae note that I changed the sentence in the lede, per Marek's comment, to read that "Some" soldiers engaged in antisemitic violence. I adequately addressed Marek's legitimate concern that the sentence not imply that all of the soldiers in Haller's army did this. After I made the change in January, Marek did not complian about the article.Faustian (talk) 03:08, 11 April 2012 (UTC)


 * Somehow that does not bother you? As for the word "alleged" the article shows evidence that many of the allegations of anti-semitism were generated by German government sources, so the word "alleged" is appropriate in this case, is it not? --91.150.222.61 (talk) 19:26, 10 April 2012 (UTC)


 * You can't have it both ways. If the "alleged" incidents were falsehoods generated by the German government, why do you need to explain why the "alleged" incidents took place (the victims "were seen by the troops as collaborating with either the West Ukrainian military forces, Bolsheviks, or Lithuanian nationalists"). A sentence like "Among some of the worst alleged offenders within Haller's army were the 23,000 Polish-American volunteers, who were relatively late in joining the formation, and thus poorly disciplined" makes no sense with the word "alleged" in it. And if there were no such acts (that is, if they were just allegations), why did Haller issue a proclamation "in an effort to curb the abuses"? (I think you forgot to slip the word "alleged" in there.)
 * Equally disturbing is your deletion of material. Why delete the sentence "As a result of such actions, Jews perceived Haller's Army as particularly harmful"? Because it doesn't fit with your narrative that these were all figments of the German government's imagination?
 * As I wrote, you need to discuss your proposed changes and get consensus instead of edit-warring. If we're not able to reach consensus, we can try dispute resolution. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 20:06, 10 April 2012 (UTC)


 * We can argue about the language used, and I can understand that. But, to keep a "minority view" like that of William W. Hagen on the 1918 Lwów pogroms is preposterous, and against Wiki rules. Also, regarding the removal of the phrase "As a result of such actions, Jews perceived Haller's Army as particularly harmful"... Again, that statement reinforces a "point of view". Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and you don't use such phrases. You can write something like that in a history/opinion book, that blurs the like between opinion and actual events. --91.150.222.61 (talk) 20:19, 10 April 2012 (UTC)


 * With respect to Hagen, the paragraph starts by saying "Haller's troops have been mistakenly accused of committing the Lwów Pogrom of 1918", and it questions Hagen's account right afterward. Hagen is a serious historian, and I don't think we can ignore him altogether. (He may represent, as you wrote, a minority viewpoint, but I don't think it's a fringe theory.) Instead, we all but tell readers that he's wrong.
 * I don't agree that saying how Jews perceived the Blue Army "reinforces" a POV. It is merely stating a fact. It may have been a misperception, but that is the way Jews of the time felt. Likewise, the article describes the way Ukrainians of the time felt. Would we remove the sentence that says the army was "highly regarded by the Poles"? — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 20:53, 10 April 2012 (UTC)

Intro paragraph
User:Faustian, regarding this statement from the report in the intro section, you are using a quote that does not reference/name the Blue Army directly only Polish soldiers, using your logic, I should then add that the BA suspected that the Jews collaborated with Bolsheviks because that's also referenced in that paragraph. Btw, as you know the BA was tied to France and as Encyclopedia Judaica states "because of its French ties the Blue Army enjoyed independence from the main Polish command" so they were not a Polish army, and the quote you are using does not directly apply. --E-960 (talk) 06:38, 6 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Also, this article has the longest reference source quotes, in no other WP article do we find entire encyclopedia paragraphs typed out as reference. The standard procedure is just to use a hyperlink or a sentence. --E-960 (talk) 06:50, 6 March 2017 (UTC)


 * The info was placed in the reference section as a compromise, keeping the detuials out of the body of the article. Please do not censor the article.  Also, the "excuses" you added to the intro are original research (the source does not explicitly state that this was the cause for the murder of Jews) and do not belong there. Please discuss before making such changes to the article.Faustian (talk) 13:17, 6 March 2017 (UTC)

Pavel Korzec
One. Can we cite him directly, not through a reference to his work in another work? Second. Is he a reliable source? I am having trouble finding much about him. Is he a professional historian, or an amateur one? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 10:12, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Paweł (Pawel) usually - . Died 2012. Professional historian, in Centre national de la recherche scientifique, and is cited. Icewhiz (talk) 12:01, 22 October 2018 (UTC)