Talk:Blues for the Red Sun/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crowz  RSA  02:32, 4 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Review
 * I've copy-edited the page. Crowz  RSA  02:32, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Kyuss & Chris Goss (in the infobox) — should be Kyuss and Chris Goss Crowz  RSA  17:15, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Stoner rock/metal (in the infobox) — should be 'Stoner rock, heavy metal]]'' or something. Crowz  RSA  17:15, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * The intro needs to be expanded. Crowz  RSA  18:05, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I've expanded the lead slightly. If it requires more expansion feel free to tell me. RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Kyuss only used half the P.A. system for the other eight concerts. — What is the P.A. system? Crowz  RSA  02:32, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
 * A system used to distribute sound. I've provided a link in the article. RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * The album was also popular on album-oriented radio and picked up airplay on stations including KNAC, KISW, WYSP, and KIOZ. — This line does not make sense to me, nor does it read well. Crowz  RSA  02:32, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
 * How's this for better wording: "The album also received airplay on such album-oriented radio stations as KNAC, KISW, WYSP, and KIOZ." RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Daniel Bukszpan has wrote that the album has influenced "countless" bands. — Whoever Daniel Bukszpan is, it should be noted after or before his name (ie MTVs Daniel Bukszpan [or] Daniel Bukszpan of MTV) Crowz'  RSA  02:32, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
 * The author of The Encyclopedia of Heavy Metal. RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Many consider Blues for the Red Sun, —This should be specific, and I'm sure they all didn't say that quote. Crowz  RSA  02:32, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
 * That's as specific as the source gets. "a record lauded by many as the template for 21st century bands that have followed in the pioneering wake of Kyuss." RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Some even consider it the best album Kyuss ever made. — More specific Crowz  RSA  18:05, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I've made it clear that this was Steve Taylor's opinion. RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * The personnel section should have links to things like vocals, guitar, bass, drums, producing, mixing etc. Crowz  RSA  17:15, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. RG (talk) 06:26, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * File:KyussBluesfortheRedSun.jpg should be of at least 200 x 200 (it's now 200 x 197) Crowz  RSA  17:15, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Truth be told, I'm sort of clueless when it comes to uploading images and things like that. I don't know how to get the image to those measurements. Is there anything I can read to help me with this problem? RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I fixed it. Crowz  RSA  17:47, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Ref 8 has incorrect name Crowz  RSA  17:15, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. RG (talk) 06:25, 12 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Result
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (No OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Everything looks good, so I am passing the article. Congrats, Crowz  RSA  17:47, 12 August 2010 (UTC)