Talk:Bobby Pulido/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 06:06, 25 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * The black–and–white photo of Bobby Pulido requires an alt description, so please add one


 * Just for stylistic purposes, I'd add the appropriate amount of spaces into the "embed" parameter as the rest of parameters

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 * "Pulido debuted on the music scene in 1995 as the lead vocalist of his eponymous band, and the same year he signed a recording contract with EMI Latin and released his debut album, Desvelado." --> Use of "and" twice in the same sentence

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 * Why does Enséñame redirect to the album article for Rebelde? Wrong link


 * Slight suggestion: "By 2000, the popularity of Tejano music was declining; Pulido's subsequent albums failed to chart anywhere." --> "By 2000, the popularity of Tejano music was declining, resulting in Pulido's subsequent albums to not chart anywhere."

1971–94: Early life and career beginnings

 * Nada! Great job!! :)
 * Thank you =)

1995–99: Debut album and commercial success

 * Again, please unlink Enséñame as it redirects to the album article for Rebelde?


 * Slight suggestion: "Enséñame peaked at number ten on the U.S. Billboard Top Latin Albums and number two on the U.S. Billboard Regional Mexican Albums chart.[17]" --> Perhaps you could add a statement before this stating that the album was commercially successful in the US?

2000–09: Professional struggles, acting debut, and hiatus

 * Slight suggestion: "2000–09: Professional struggles, acting debut, and hiatus" --> "2000–09: Decline in popularity, acting debut, and hiatus"


 * "In March 2000, he released Zona de Peligro, which was less successful than his previous albums; it peaked at number 48 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[33]" --> "In March 2000, he released Zona de Peligro, which was less successful than his previous albums, peaking at number 48 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[33]"


 * "Pulido released his sixth studio album Siempre Pensando En Ti in March 2001, it fared less well commercially, peaking at number 50 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[36]" --> "Pulido released his sixth studio album Siempre Pensando En Ti in March 2001; it fared less well commercially, peaking at number 50 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[36]"


 * Why does Bobby link to the album article for Bobby Brown?

2010–present: Return to music and acting

 * Great work! Nothing to add here!
 * Thank you =)

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 * "Pulido asked Anzaldua for a divorce in September 2013, after 17 years of being married and four months of separation.[49]" --> I think this reads awkwardly; could it be something along the lines of "However, Pulido filed for divorce in September 2013, after 17 years of being married and four months of separation.[49]" ? What do you think?

Discography

 * I think you're missing Desvelado here; and then remember to link Desvelado in addition

Filmography

 * Fantastic job!

End of GA Review:
On hold for seven days. Great work and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:29, 26 June 2016 (UTC).
 * I have fixed all issues. Thanks again for your review, – jona  ✉ 12:33, 26 June 2016 (UTC)