Talk:Bodyguard/Archives/2016

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I've tagged this article for a complete rewrite. It is possibly the worst use of internet space I have ever seen. It sounds more like some mall cop wrote this article with perverse delusions of grandeur. Someone please turn this classified ad into a respectable article. Ocelotorange (talk) 10:54, 15 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Wow. This page is riddled with asshatery. Chuckles5492 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.108.184.10 (talk) 18:24, 10 December 2007 (UTC)


 * This page definitely needs some cleanup. I dealt with some obvious issues tonight, but will come back to it.

--Ilnyckyj 02:48, 31 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Oh, come on..."Typical Day"? This is written like the script to a documentary. Someone, please, rewrite this article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.137.207.20 (talk) 00:02, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Hi, thank you for the comments. Some of the comments could be made more politely (e.g., "asshatery"), but I get the point. Upon re-reading my contributions, I agree that it looks like an article in some "Special Forces and Bodyguard Magazine" that a delusional mall cop might be reading, as he fantasizes about becoming a Secret Service bodyguard with a machine pistol and body armour. I have trimmed some of the more dramatic and overblown parts out, such as the exciting description of engaging in counter-sniper tactics and the combat driving stuff. Now it is a bit calmer, and more encyclopedia-like. OnBeyondZebrax (talk) 12:02, 18 July 2009 (UTC)