Talk:Boenga Roos dari Tjikembang (novel)

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This looks quite solid to me and ready for FA; it's a great article on an interesting-sounding work. As a caveat, though, I should warn you that my brain's a little wonky this morning, so this may not be quite up to usual copyediting. A few notes outside of the self-explanatory:


 * "schools that focused on modernity" -- just a little vague --they studied modernity as a subject? Used modern learning techniques? Worked in the vernacular instead of a classical language?
 * "Kwee wrote that he was inspired to write" -- avoid repetition of "write"
 * I delinked Buddhism as the name of a major religion per WP:OVERLINK

Good luck with this one, and thanks as always for your massive contributions! -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:51, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot Khazar, got both of those! (Have one more source, a translation of Claudine Salmon's Literature in Malay by the Chinese of Indonesia, on the way, which may offer some more explanation of the themes) — Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:55, 22 July 2013 (UTC)

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 * http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2014/08/25/the-rose-cikembang-the-holy-concubine.html - for later — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:16, 22 September 2014 (UTC)