Talk:Bombing of Tokyo (10 March 1945)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 06:57, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

I'll do this one, comments to follow over next few days. Zawed (talk) 06:57, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

Comments
Looks really good Nick, only two substantive points:
 * Infobox: Shizuichi Tanaka is mentioned as a commander/leader but doesn't appear to be mentioned anywhere in body of article.
 * I've added him in a note. None of the sources mentions him as having played an active role in this battle, but he was the overall commander Nick-D (talk) 04:57, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Departure section: "in bands between 5000 to 7000 feet" for consistency with other measurements, shouldn't it be 5,000 to 7,000, plus conversions?
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 04:57, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

Other stuff

 * No dab links
 * Dupe links: firebombing; night fighter
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 04:57, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
 * External links all work
 * Images appear to have appropriate tags

Will check back in a few. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 01:51, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for your review: I think that I've now addressed those comments. Nick-D (talk) 04:57, 15 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Yes, looks good. Completing checklist below and passing as GA. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 06:33, 15 April 2018 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: