Talk:Bondiola sandwich/Archive 1

Issues with article
This is an exceptionally badly written article. Possibly the author's first language isn't English? In any event:

> The article never make it clear if "bondiola" refers to the sandwich specifically, or to the meat which is the basis of the sandwich.

> The article has a "history" section, which contains no history, but is rather a description of the sandwich.

> The "description" section starts in the middle, describing variations on the sandwich (which was described in the previous section) and then abruptly switches to describing how the meat is prepared. These would be better as seperate sections.

> The article describes "boston butt" as a sandwich (equivalent to bondiola sandwich), which it is not (it is a cut of raw meat, not equivalent to anything described in the article).

To the author's credit, there don't seem to be any misspelled words or egregious grammar errors. But the reviewers of the article should be ashamed of themselves for calling it a "good article". 2601:589:300:CA70:A8C7:6023:7DB4:25BA (talk) 18:19, 1 March 2023 (UTC)


 * I started the article and my first language is English. I hope that you can make positive edits to the article to address any deficits that you may discover. Bruxton (talk) 04:09, 10 March 2023 (UTC)