Talk:Bonnie Blue Southern Market & Bakery/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Steelkamp (talk · contribs) 05:25, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

Well written

 * The sectioning could do with some modification. Currently, the whole article is under the "history" section and "2010s" and "2020s" is under the "early history" section, which I think is a bit wrong. I would change "2010s" and "2020s" to a level three heading and change "Reception" and "Historic designation" to a level two heading.
 * ...the restaurant's décor and name was inspired by... Suggest changing to ...the restaurant's décor and name were inspired by...
 * ...but on some days it occasionally runs 24 hours. This is saying the same thing twice. I would change to either ...but on some days it runs 24 hours. or ...but it occasionally runs 24 hours.
 * After the $25,000 renovation was completed the following year... This implies the renovation has already been mentioned, which I don't believe it has. I suggest changing to After a $25,000 renovation was completed the following year...
 * Nichols praised the pulled pork sandwich and beans, and if someone ate breakfast there... I recommend changing to Nichols praised the pulled pork sandwich and beans at Bonnie Blue, and if someone ate breakfast there...
 * ...Nichols discussed his visit to Bonnie Blue was part of a road trip with his fiancé. I recommend changing to Nichols said his visit to Bonnie Blue was part of a road trip with his fiancé. as I don't think the original sentence is grammatically correct.
 * The following year Bonnie Blue hosted Nancy Tabaka's first solo art show. Since it was quite far back that 2017 was mentioned, I would just replace this with In 2018 Bonnie Blue hosted Nancy Tabaka's first solo art show.
 * What is the "VDR"? Is the referring to the VLR?
 * After boundary increases to the historic district in 2003 and 2008, the VDR expanded it once again on September 17, 2015, and the NRHP on January 5, 2016. So I understand, is this saying that the 2015 boundary change was the change that included this restaurant? If so, do the 2003 and 2008 boundary changes need to be mentioned?
 * I didn't feel the former two boundaries to the historic district needed to be mentioned since the rest of the contributing properties aren't covered in this topic. If you think they should, I can come up with something.
 * Sorry, what I meant is that I don't see why "After boundary increases to the historic district in 2003 and 2008" is mentioned. ✅
 * ...including 334 West Boscawen Street... This can be changed to ...including the Bonnie Blue restaurant...
 * The following year Bonnie Blue hosted Nancy Tabaka's first solo art show. Since it was quite far back that 2017 was mentioned, I would just replace this with In 2018 Bonnie Blue hosted Nancy Tabaka's first solo art show.
 * What is the "VDR"? Is the referring to the VLR?
 * After boundary increases to the historic district in 2003 and 2008, the VDR expanded it once again on September 17, 2015, and the NRHP on January 5, 2016. So I understand, is this saying that the 2015 boundary change was the change that included this restaurant? If so, do the 2003 and 2008 boundary changes need to be mentioned?
 * I didn't feel the former two boundaries to the historic district needed to be mentioned since the rest of the contributing properties aren't covered in this topic. If you think they should, I can come up with something.
 * Sorry, what I meant is that I don't see why "After boundary increases to the historic district in 2003 and 2008" is mentioned. ✅
 * ...including 334 West Boscawen Street... This can be changed to ...including the Bonnie Blue restaurant...
 * Sorry, what I meant is that I don't see why "After boundary increases to the historic district in 2003 and 2008" is mentioned. ✅
 * ...including 334 West Boscawen Street... This can be changed to ...including the Bonnie Blue restaurant...

Verifiable with no original research
Sources I checked: 3, 4, 12, 13, 14, 23 and 37.
 * Source 3 and 34 are the same and should be merged into one.
 * In another article titled "Before the Wedding, a Test: 3,000 Miles of Barbecue", Nichols said his visit to Bonnie Blue was part of a road trip with his fiancé.[12] Source 12 should be replaced with source 13 here. ✅

Illustrated, if possible

 * Optional: Add alt text to the infobox image.
 * I thought it was already there under "alt = Photograph of Bonnie Blue Southern Market & Bakery"?


 * Good to see the other images have alt text though.

General
Looks ready to pass now! Steelkamp (talk) 15:52, 29 December 2023 (UTC)