Talk:Bonnie Newman/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BrianDeeG (talk · contribs) 20:11, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

Failed nomination
The article is nowhere near ready for GAN. It is little more than an overview which presents a number of high-level facts. There is no bibliography, which breaches MOS, and the citations include only one from a book. The rest are taken from websites with the possibility of copy and paste. I note that it is currently given a C-class rating but it is no more than start-class. Considerable expansion is needed before it can be reconsidered. --Brian (talk) 20:11, 17 May 2012 (UTC)