Talk:Booth Theatre/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: MaxnaCarta (talk · contribs) 01:42, 12 June 2022 (UTC)



Comments

Formatting

 * Some duplicate links. Please check these. EG Sgraffito is linked in two immediately consecutive paragraphs.
 * done, rest of duplicate links are done once after the lead per MOS


 * Wikilinks generally look good - relevant to the text and not common words.
 * Auditorium image caption is a little long. Not a barrier to passing GA, but something to consider in future improvements.
 * Some references ie 357 are missing the publish date, but it does not appear on the source so okay to exclude.

Prose

 * Also, readability of "The Booth Theatre is on 224 West 45th Street, on the north sidewalk between Eighth Avenue and Seventh Avenue, near Times Square in the Theater District of Midtown Manhattan in New York City" seems clunky. That much detail needed?
 * - I think this is fine after some consideration. There is not really another way to say the same thing, and I'm okay with the detail here.


 * Quoin may be too technical for the average reader? It is linked, but could there be a sentence explaining this term? Or link sufficient?
 * - defining this in article not necessary. Hovering over the link shows this is a masonry block.


 * Box office record "currently" held by boys in the band, this must be changed as "currently" not appropriate - can become outdated.
 * - fixed


 * Word "recent" appears, but it is a quote so appropriate to keep.

Spot check

 * REF52:OK
 * REF93:OK
 * REF94:OK
 * REF237:OK
 * REF410:OK