Talk:Bop Gun (Homicide: Life on the Street)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:00, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing the article. Its an interesting article that conveys the flavor of the episode well. (I made a few copy edits which you are free to change.) Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:00, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * My one complaint is that per WP:LEAD, I think the lead could be beefed up more to reflect the contents of the article, including some indication of its ratings. (What were the high ratings attibuted to?)
 * I took a shot at this. Let me know if it's better. Thanks for the review! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  14:30, 18 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Yes, it is fine. Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

Congratulations! A fine article. Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * I made a few minor wording and punctuation changes.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Article is well sourced, with no original research.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * The article remains focused on the subject while covering the relevant areas.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * NPOV
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: A wonderful, concise article
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail: