Talk:Born This Way: The Remix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:41, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Info box

 * No issues.

Lead

 * Add the record label at the end of the opening sentence.
 * yet one can hear influences of Europop, techno, and dubstep within the composition. → ; there are also influences of Europop, techno, and dubstep within the composition.

Background

 * No issues.

Composition

 * Foster the People remixed "The Edge of Glory" and introduced a new break down from the 3:20 time sequence. → Source?
 * Not much change is apparent → Reword
 * "Scheiße" featured influences from The Knife song "Heartbeats" (2003) as well as Vengaboys' "We Like to Party" (1999). → Source?
 * Not much change goes into the → Reword
 * I like how you go through each song, but some parts need rewording.

Critical reception

 * No issues. This section is generally well written.

Chart performance

 * No issues.

Track listing

 * No issues.

Credits and personnel

 * No issues.

Charts and certifications

 * No issues.

Release history

 * No issues.

Summary
Good work, not many issues to fix. A well written article. On hold for 7 days. Aaron  &bull; You Da  One 16:11, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry about the lengthy wait, passing. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 21:38, 6 July 2012 (UTC)