Talk:Boroqul/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: PizzaKing13 (talk · contribs) 20:50, 25 May 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this article. 20:50, 25 May 2023 (UTC)

Infobox

 * List his birth year of c. 1162 in the infobox
 * Done

Lead

 * Is there a translation of Boroqul's name in the traditional Mongolian script? Russian Wikipedia says while Chinese and  Korean Wikipedia say  Does any source verify?
 * Not that I can find, sadly.


 * Remove the comma after "inner council"
 * Done

Life and career

 * Remove the comma after "Börte"
 * "The Secret History of the Mongols" → " The Secret History of the Mongols "
 * Mention what The Secret History of the Mongols is
 * Remove the comma after "Jurkin tribe"
 * Who was Jebe?
 * Italicize Jami' al-tawarikh
 * 1217-18 → 1217–18 (endash)
 * All done.

Overall

 * Single image is good. I assume no free images (if at all) of Boroqul exist
 * That is sadly correct.


 * Move the image to the right side so that Ögedei "faces the text" if you get what I mean
 * Done.


 * Stable
 * No war edits
 * Focused on topic

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

I've left some comments for the review. PizzaKing13  ¡Hablame!  22:59, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
 * I've responded to all your comments. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 09:00, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
 * All looks good to me. I'll pass this review. PizzaKing13   ¡Hablame!  09:05, 26 May 2023 (UTC)