Talk:Bound (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:41, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

That's really all I got. The images seem good and the prose reads great. On hold for seven days.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Any notable guest stars?
 * Lede: Can you expand a little more on the plot? It's only one tiny sentence.
 * Plot: "the previous episode" -> "the previous episode, 'Safe'" Just so we know what's what
 * Production: Add a citation after every direct quotes, such as "creepy and weird"
 * Production: "out — it" -> "out—it" only use spaces with an endash, not an emdash.
 * Production: "We had so much fun!" "That's probably my favorite sequence in the show thus far." There's two quotations back to back. Either combine them, or add a transition sentence
 * Reception: The IGN review is just a bit chunk of paragraph. Maybe paraphrase some of it and cut it up
 * Also, expand upon the Jack Bauer part and make sure you explain who he is and what show he's a part of
 * References: The Fearnet link appears to be down
 * References: 17, 18, and 19 don't have either a work or a publisher; 17 should be Gold Derby, 18 and 19 should be Academy of Television Arts & Sciences
 * Categories should be in alphabetical order
 * All done. Thanks, as always, for reviewing!  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:12, 5 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I fixed the dead link issue, but other than that, all good. I pass.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   04:23, 5 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh oops. I thought you meant the other Fearnet link (which I removed). Thanks for fixing!  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:41, 5 October 2012 (UTC)