Talk:Bowl and doily spider

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 September 2020 and 17 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Juliaskittle.

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Student Suggestion
Hello! I added a picture of North America, Wikispiders suggests including photos of where the spider lives. I would suggest adding more inline references, not just the end of paragraphs to better help the reader understand where the information comes from. Also, the taxonomy and web sections need references. I removed an ambiguous link marked by wiki for “immobilize”. Lastly, I would suggest combining sections like Pre-Copulation and Copulation only because these sections are so short. Akwan826 (talk) 18:07, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Hi! This article was well written and had a lot of interesting sections. I mostly went through and changed some of the wording around to make sure it was in a clear and concise voice. It was mostly minor changes, though. Shaynarosenbloom (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 05:05, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

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Shouldn't this link into some bigger spider project? I have a feeling there is even a template for it. Mark Richards 20:34, 4 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Here it is! I think these need to be merged. Bowl-and-doily and dwarf spiders
 * No. one is about spider family, another is about a species. Mikkalai 20:43, 4 Mar 2004 (UTC)

Yes you should just link them all together — Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.176.112.21 (talk) 20:25, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

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Student Peer Edit
I really like your entry. Your information is well organized and referenced. In the Taxonomy section, you should add the reference for what is written there. I made some minor grammatical changes, but overall, it’s really well written. The Typical Prey and Prey Capture subsection says that there is an ambiguation, I tried to fix it, but I wasn’t sure what definition of immobilizing you wanted to use; I wasn’t sure if I should delete the hyperlink to that page, I recommend you to check/fix this. In the Web Design and Prey Memory subsection, there is no citation, you should add the citation for both subsections. Also, if you can add a map or the particular places – States or cities – where this spider species could be found it would be great to guide the future reader of your entry. Salazarjhan (talk) 22:48, 30 November 2020 (CST)