Talk:Boy (I Need You)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:50, 14 February 2013 (UTC)

Non-reviewer comment – That background section is the perfect example of WP:UNDUE and needs pruning. If any other help is needed let me know. Would love to help around although I'm getting the hang of it. :) — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 12:13, 21 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Please, any help is great. :) - Saulo  Talk to Me 00:19, 23 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * the singer decided release to "Boy (I Need You)" instead. → Remove the "to", it makes no sense.
 * I changed it to "the singer decided to release" instead. Take a look. - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Background
 * I have no problem with this, I like to actually read proper background and much of what led up to Charmbracelet was created influenced by what happened over the two years previous.


 * Release and composition
 * I wouldn't actually call this composition, as there is no composition info. It is more about recording.
 * Retitled to "Recording and release". - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Reception
 * Order it from positive to negative reviews instead of having positive then negative then positive
 * Take a look. - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Music video and live performances
 * recoding → recording
 * - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Didn't she perform the song on Graham Norton?
 * - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Charts
 * US R&B Airplay shouldn't be included as it charted on the main R&B chart. See WP:USCHARTS
 * - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)


 * References
 * A lot of the work/publisher fields are not linked the first time, such as Fox, USA Today and MTV
 * Take a look and see if everything's fixed. - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:39, 3 March 2013 (UTC)

On hold for 7 days. Hardly anything to fault here. — AARON  &bull; TALK   16:47, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
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